Wednesday 30 October 2013

Ruby 100 Word Challenge #9

The violent storm was horrible I didn’t like it I hated it. My brother said it was enormous but I said he was over reacting. My mum said it was huge. But then it got worse and my brother was right. Then I said that it’s gigantic. I then said it was the worst storm I’ve ever seen and so did my brother. But my mum says it is not so bad I have seen worse. I hated it. It was so annoying and scary. I absolutely hated it I was annoyed it was painful for me and my brother.

1 comment:

  1. Why was it painful? Could you think of alternatives for hated (you've used that word 3 times)

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