Monday 4 November 2013

Amy 100 Word Challenge #10


On one extraordinary day an unfortunate thing happened.
A scientist had found a strange thing sticking up in a river. The strange thing turned out to be some legs sticking up in the river.
It turned out that a hot air balloon had gone bit crazy and someone had fallen into the river head first. Unfortunately the poor little boy had been stuck there so long that he passed away.
The next morning, everyone went up to that river and filled it up with flowers, memories and cards. Everyone was upset but they would always remember the little boy, Liam.

2 comments:

  1. An interesting explanation of how the scene in the picture came to be! I liked your introductory sentence the events you described were certainly extraordinary and unfortunate.

    Could you think of a replacement for, 'turned out' as you have used this phrase twice!

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  2. What a sad story. Clever idea too. But another phrase you've repeated twice is 'sticking up in the river'. When you only have 100 words you need to think very hard about each one.

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