Saturday 30 November 2013

Anh 100WC#13

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The request was unheard. A blood-sucking creature staggered its way towards the friends and sent out a sticky tar connecting the brother's feet to the ground. They, froze in fear and cold yet Sam managed out a shrill, "help!" The answer they received was rain, just as the beast let out a manic laughter. Hope was leaving and soon almost all hope was gone. "Get in,” shouted a girl wearing a cape and top saying S.S, in a limousine. She shot some acid onto the substance and they ran in the vehicle just as the monster swore its revenge...

1 comment:

  1. I was a bit confused by your opening - are they friends or brother and sister?
    As always you have made some good word choices; staggered, request, substance, revenge, manic...
    Should it be, '.. the beast let out a manic laugh'?

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