Friday 1 November 2013

Anna 100 Word Challenge #9

One day the violent storm came towards the countryside and everyone’s teeth were chattering but they did know that the storm was coming well nearly every one new about the terrible storm the people who worked in the fields had to finish of their work before they could take shelter. All the children stopped playing in the garden and went to shelter in their house from the distance thunder and lightning was coming closer and closer everyone was terrified then before they could sit down the lights went off and no one knew what was happening DUN DUN DUN. !!

1 comment:

  1. Your first sentence is a bit confusing - did they know or not? I like the way you have tried to create a cliff hanger ending.

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