Friday 6 December 2013

..and the noise stopped... by Finlay

Sam was lying in bed silently as his parent chatted along. Suddenly after that Sam woke up with a noise of a huge bang. Terrified he pulled his bed covers right over him trying not to hear the incredibly huge sound. But then it struck again and Sam was not happy at all! After all of this he sprinted right down the dark, gloomy stair case to tell his unknown parents. After all they did not listen. Because of this he strolled outside to see what was going on and then the noise stopped immediately.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Finlay - well done with this 100WC. You've tried to include some really powerful vocabulary as well as writing a good story. Excellent work :-)

    Su Harris (Team 100WC Suffolk Uk)

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