Friday 6 December 2013

...and the noise stopped... by Tilly

And then the noise stopped. We all calmed down. But then it started again. The horrible howling, of what we didn't know.We were all screaming and running, as we were in the park. We didn't know what to do. Suddenly, Jack saw a shadow dart through the forest in the time it would have taken a cheetah. He stuttered, " I t-t-t-t-think I j-j-j-just saw what was making the n-n-n-noise." He rushed into the forest, and of course I had to follow him, so we both crept through, trying to dodge any sticks on the ground.He suddenly stopped dead.

1 comment:

  1. Very exciting piece of writing, Tilly, with some super vocabulary. Well done!
    Mrs Maclean,Team 100WC

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