In the morning on my 7th birthday I opened a toy guinea pig from my Mum and Dad but when I put the batteries in two days later my guinea pig stopped working and I started to cry I was real up set so I had to take it back to Argos witch I thought was a real shame so I told my mum and dad please may I have something to replace it and so we went and they got me a toy dog and I was so pleased and it still works today.
Based on a true story!
Mr Dunn Australia (Team 100 WC) Hi Lili, I love true stories and this one was easy to read. Try to remember to make your sentences much shorter by using full stops. Keep up the great work and most of all keep on writing! Well done Lili!
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