Saturday 18 January 2014

Lewis 100WC#17

This custard tasted like out of date eggs! It was so horrible that I nearly threw up! I had to say to my Mum that it was brilliant and I loved it so it didn't hurt her feelings! So this meant she would keep making this custard until I had to confess that I hated it! But I couldn't, it would hurt her feelings so much she would be sad all day! I have to or I would be sick. If I did not confess and I threw up she would feel worse than if I owned up to this problem, what will I do?

1 comment:

  1. Well done, Lewis. That must be the downside of being sensitive to the feelings of others!
    Very nicely written. A good idea with clear sentences and punctuation.

    Keep up the good work!

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