In this picture you can see a half of a shed that is painted red, you can also see that the bright red paint has slowly started to come off, on the bright red paint there is some type of green moss thing on it. {The type of thing that you get on your fence}
Another thing that you can see in this picture is the window. The window has a little bit of ice, frost or snow, but I am not very sure at all.
On the inside of the bright red shed, is a bright pink jumper .
Another thing that you can see in this picture is the window. The window has a little bit of ice, frost or snow, but I am not very sure at all.
On the inside of the bright red shed, is a bright pink jumper .
Hi Neizan,
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting take on the 100 Word Challenge! I’ve read lots of different stories this morning, but reading such a clear and well-written description of the shed was very different and I really enjoyed reading it – well done.
I like how you talked to your reader throughout your writing rather than simply describing it. This connection between author and reader is very clever and tricky to do, but you carried it out really well.
Be careful with your brackets, as they should be part of the sentence about the moss instead of a separate sentence.
Keep up the good work!
Mr Hyde
Team 100WC
Willoughby, Lincolnshire, England