This Picture is a masterpiece with amazing flashes of lights around this magical place it is very wonderful and spectacular to look at especially the golden building at the back. When you see this place you feel like you're dreaming because it’s so magical and unbelievable. I have never seen a place so weird before, some of the people have shadows reflecting on the light! As you look at the building behind it almost looks as if it’s a golden treasure chest ready to be opened. It’s also weird because there’s people that look like a ghost It’s so strange!
Hi Amy,
ReplyDeleteYou have written quite a vivid description of the picture. I wonder if you could use this to write a story or narrative about the scene? I love the line about the 'golden treasure chest'. In my 5/6 class, we call that rich writing and we LOVE rich writing because it paints a picture for the reader. Keep writing and sharing!
Mary (Team 100WC, Australia)