Wednesday 5 February 2014

Finlay #20

Super Fish, the fastest and greatest fish in the whole ocean! Every summer all of the fish gather
together in a stadium for the ultimate one hundred metre swim. This year Super Fish was defending his title for the second time. They were all at the starting point waiting for the buzzer. On your marks get set go! They were off speeding as fast as they could but Super Fish was right ahead he was like a flash of lightning. Suddenly he lost control knocking him unconscious. He had disappeared but all we could see was water
Where was he?

1 comment:

  1. I like how your story sounds like a sort of ocean Olympics, to coincide with the Winter Olympics going on now in our human world - nice timing! You wrote in a way that conveys the excitement of watching a sporting event, and added a touch of mystery and suspense at the end. Good work using the prompt, and I hope to read more from you to come.

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