Saturday 8 March 2014

Cinderella by Romola #24

Once upon a time there lived a sweet girl named Cinderella. Her mum had died, so her dad remarried. Soon after she moved in with her step family, her dad died. Her new family were mean, so they made her be their maid. 
One day the family got an invitation to the royal ball. Cinderella wasn't allowed to go because she had to clean the house. When the evil step family left for the ball, Cinderella decided to go to the ball. She turned up in her raggy clothes. Her step family were so embarrassed they left the ball early.

1 comment:

  1. Thanks Romola- I like the twist you have created on the original story. You have used some varied sentence starters-which help the reader follow the order of events. You have described the clothes and how the step family felt- I just wondered whether these descriptions could be supported by additional words?
    Mr Furlong-Team 100-Norwich

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