Saturday 22 March 2014

…look up! Can you see… by Talia

Look up! Can you see?” shouted Bella.
“ See what!” exclaimed Paris.
“That ….thing heading down to Earth.” explained Bella.
“ What!” said Paris horrified. 
There was a meteor heading down to Earth straight in the girls direction. What were they going to do?
“Bellarrrrrrr what shall we do?” trembled Paris
“Ruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun!” screamed Bella.
There was no hope there had to be a miracle to happen to save them! Suddenly a person came flying through the air.
“Hi I am Supernan. How can I help?” An old lady said.
“There is a thing coming this way.” They both said.
“O yes there is!”

1 comment:

  1. Thalia

    What a great story, thank you for sharing this with is. Your sentence structure really gave us a sense of how scary things were.

    The idea of Supernan to the rescue. Well love our Grans.

    Well done,

    Mrs DW Team 100.

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