In England lots of different species of bees have been dropping rapidly. Bee numbers all over the country are dropping, and all because of human kind!
Newspapers, magazines, we get a first glimpse of the front cover and then it hits us almost off the face of the Earth! In the image you can see a bee laying on the huge human pier, being examined carefully by tiny crime scene investigators! They took a shrinking potion so they could examine the bee more efficiently. A human's
newspaper hit it round the face, and at the same time broke its leg!
I liked how you turned this into a story using the real idea of bee numbers dropping - it was very clever. You ahve used some good words and imagery here so keep up the good work.
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