Dear World leaders,
Recently I read a story about a girl called Lucy age 11 who is unable to attend school. I feel this is such a shame especially in this day and age. Lucy has a disability but this shouldn’t stop any child having an education. Her Mother is unable to take Lucy to school as Lucy needs to be carried, is there no way the government or local authorities could raise money to provide transport and a wheelchair this would give her some independence and get her into education that every child deserves.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Millie O
Very good, Millie.
ReplyDeleteYou explain your point with Lucy's example very clearly. Maybe the question to leaders could be on a new line and begin with a CAP (Is...)? There is also a stop missing in that last long sentence.
Overall, though, this is very well written and clear.
Keep up the good work!