There was once a girl called Melissa who was colour blind. There was also a boy called
Harry who wasn't colour blind.
Melissa's favourite colour was yellow which was strange for Harry because if you was colour blind you would see yellow as the right colour but you would also see green and red as the colour yellow. So Melissa and Harry had a fight. Harry said that the colour was red and green but Melissa said "but it is yellow."
The quarrel lasted for two hours until Harry said to Melissa "fine have it your way."
“OK I will - end of this quarrel.”
Well done, Clarissa! I liked your opening sentence - it is an interesting idea to write about! There are a couple of missing commas, but on the whole, you have punctuated the writing well. Keep up the good work with the next challenge!
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