Friday 26 September 2014

The zoo by Olivia

The other day I went to the zoo with my mum and dad and I had a sandwich which had pepper with it but the lady that made it forgot the pepper. After a while we went to look around and we saw a green crocodile. Then we saw a little bird that was orange and green and it was very soft. The next stop it was a quite a weird one because it looks like a zebra but it was a monkey with a very white and long beard then it was time to go home, oh!

1 comment:

  1. Olivia I loved your very descriptive story of a zoo visit - nice use of the words in the prompt. And I like the ending, with a bit of a surprise, quite an unusual creature! Keep up the good work.

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