Thursday 2 October 2014

As I looked around by Sam B

Last week I went to my friend's house, it was a bit crazy, this is how it went:
"I dare you to try and collect a few biscuits for us to snack on," whispered Jack (my friend).

I sneaked downstairs and opened the cupboard door. As I looked around I heard a slight squeaking sound. I looked behind me to see a tiny mouse running around with a bit of cheese. I wanted to smash him but that would've given me away so I decided to quickly grab a few biscuits and then I dashed upstairs just before his mum appeared.

1 comment:

  1. Sam you did well and it looks like you realy tried. I think that was one of the best ones I have read!

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