Thursday 20 November 2014

100WC#12 He was shocked to find…by Caitlin

He was shocked to find a Macaw in the bag and as it stretched out its wings it revealed all its beauty. The lord could not have seen more rainbows of colour in his life. The lord had a flashback to the times of when there was colour in the world. “Oh no, what have I done,” he sobbed as he buried his head in his hands. As a colourful tear appeared in his eye it rolled slowly down his cheek, then as the tear hit the floor the whole world shook. The world was filled with colour again… 

3 comments:

  1. Caitlin, I love your story, I especially like the sentence "revealed all its beauty"

    Keep up the good work.

    Tom Smith (Team 100WC)

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  2. Your story is intriguing. I love how his colourful tear returned colour and beauty to the world.
    Well done!

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  3. Dear Caitlin,
    What a beautiful name and a beautiful story. Your story for the 100 word challenge is very original and very well written.I love the idea of such a beautiful creature reminding the evil Lord of Nulth of the beauty which was in the world. Very well done!
    Best wishes,
    Niamh Team 100 Ireland

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