Saturday 21 March 2015

Jemima …as they turned the corner… 100WC#26

Mark had always been a bit of a dodgy driver, everyone agreed. He did not mind though, he was always open to a little advice, that is if anybody ever had any! He had been involved in three crashes, so he had three cars.
One Thursday, Mark was on his way to work, the roads seemed quiet, it was peaceful. Meanwhile, a car with two women inside, that were speeding, were driving down towards the corner. As they turned the corner Mark slammed on his brakes. "Whoa, that was close!" He exclaimed, quite surprised. He had not crashed! He could not believe his eyes.

1 comment:

  1. Mrs Skinner (team100)24 March 2015 at 19:22

    Hi Jemima,

    I really enjoyed reading your 100 Word Challenge entry. You have added lots of extra details to your sentences, varied your openers and used your punctuation well. I wonder if Mark's luck has changed or whether there is another accident waiting around the next corner?

    I wonder if in your next 100WC you could ty and use a semi-colon.

    Keep rising to the challenge
    Mrs Gill (Team 100WC

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