Saturday 21 March 2015

Rio …as they turned the corner… 100WC#26

There were three people called Joe, Bob and Jim. They were walking home from school one afternoon and as they turned the corner they fell down a huge black hole to another dimension. As they fell they had nausea because there were lots of bright purple lights messing with their eyes and freezing them. They soon realised that it was actually a portal they had fallen into. Then all of a sudden they were in another world they were told that if they kill the king (who is evil) they would let them all go home but they never did.

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  1. Hi Rio
    What a shock that would be to fall through into another dimension. This was a very creative use of the prompt for week 26 of the 100 word challenge and your description of the fall with the Nausea and flashing purple lights makes it all seem so real. Sounds like we need another instalment of this to learn what happened the three boys after they fell through the portal. Well done. I really enjoyed reading this.
    Ms O'Keeffe (team 100wc)
    Ireland

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