Sunday 8 March 2015

… then when I looked out of the plane window… by Harvey

It was the six weeks holiday and our family was going to America. I was so excited and nervous at the same time as I hadn’t been on a plane before. As we got on the plane there were hundreds of seats all around the huge plane. We got seated and waited for take-off I held on tight to the arm rests and closed my eyes. The plane started travelling faster and faster when all of a sudden we lifted off the ground. Eventually I opened my eyes then when I looked out of the plane window it was amazing what a view my nerves had gone.

6 comments:

  1. Great story Harvey, I like the story and I also like the picture.

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  2. Well done you have done a really good job at building up to the take of also i like the way you started it of. Finally you did a good job at describing the plane.
    by Caitlin

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  3. I loved your little story because that's what I was like on my first flight.
    Will J

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  4. I think its good

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  5. Well done you did a good job and you used description and i liked the bit when you put Eventually I opened my eyes then when I looked out of the plane window it was amazing what a view my nerves had gone i liked that bit.

    By Olivia

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  6. Its O.K but some of it didn't make sense

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