Sunday 8 March 2015

… then when I looked out of the plane window…by Charlie

When I went on an airplane for the very first time I was six years old. We flew from Stansted airport to the island of Madeira. As I boarded the airplane it looked huge from where I stood, as I walked up the steps into the cabin I looked through the pilot's window and I saw him turn around and wave to me. I sat down and fastened my seat belt, then when I looked out of the plain window we were starting to move and soon we were in the sky flying really high. Guess what, we really had a good time on our holiday with my family.

4 comments:

  1. I think you did a good job and you used description and it was a great story and i like the bit when you said as I walked up the steps into the cabin I looked through the pilot's window and I saw him turn around and wave to me i think that was a good bit

    By Olivia

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  2. I liked your description but I would not go on that plane.
    Will J

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  3. I love your story Charlie. I think it makes sense all the way through. Rose K

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  4. WELL done it is very good

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