Saturday 16 May 2015

Eleanor - 100WC#32

One day I saw a little man climb up a tree stump to come across a big chicken. The little man knew he was in trouble because his is tiny and the chicken is massive.The little man tried to step away but it was too late because as soon as he backed away the chicken would squeak and hiss at him. In front of him there were some seeds, the chicken wanted them but the man was on an adventure and all he had was a drink of orange juice.

3 comments:

  1. Well done, Eleanor, you 've explained everything in the photo and used your imagination in doing so. Keep up the good storytelling!.

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  2. I didn't quite understand some bits like 'his is tiny and the chicken is massive'. They did not quite make scene. Still you did describe the picture well. It needs a bit of work but well done.
    Sam, The Richmond School Skegness.

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  3. Eleanor I do like the way you have made the man seem very determined to get those seeds even though the big bird was a threat. Would you like to be on an adventure where you were suddenly very small? I'm not sure I would. Well done for entering the 100WC this week and using your imagination to create your story.

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