I was just coming out of the A&E doors from having an x-ray on my hand. I was just getting it looked at to check in wasn’t broken. It turns out it wasn’t, it was only sprained. It all started with a rough game including my brother, Dad and I. We were playing invasions of the evil warriors. A rubbish game to tell the truth. Dad jumped on my back and I collapsed. But Later that day it happened again, my dad jumped in exactly the same place but I hopped out of the way and he face planted the floor! Oooops!
Dear Kirsten, I LOVE the story. I like the adjectives you could of put good game but instead you put rough game.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time, try and not use the same bit of punctuation like this: But Later that day it happened again, my dad jumped in exactly the same place but I hopped out of the way and he face planted the floor... Oooops! Instead of using two exclamation marks I used an ellipsis.
Well done!
From Ray.
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