Monday 11 September 2017

…so, what lies ahead of… by Macey-Jane

So what lies ahead of us? 
I go on a walk with my dog, I feel dizzy. Things are spinning around me. What do I do?  
I see people rising from their graves. I see people running and screaming. I find myself sinking into the ground and I drop on a pile of manure. I get up and I start walking. I stopped and thought where am I this is not my house where is my dog? I carried on walking then I saw something run by my feet. I looked around then I felt something tap me. I vanished.

1 comment:

  1. Hope you survived M-J!

    Like your use of short sentences to build tension!

    Have visited your school a long time ago!

    From Mr Hales #Team100WC

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