tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post2805256428419092752..comments2023-06-10T12:33:38.919+01:00Comments on 100 Word Challenge @ The Richmond School: The Prison Cell by Tyler WDavid Ballhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07808890305733269826noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-62589013282262555332016-07-05T22:53:19.741+01:002016-07-05T22:53:19.741+01:00Hello Tyler W,
You know the power words can have ...Hello Tyler W,<br /><br />You know the power words can have to create images in the minds of readers and have done so with exactly 100 words. The use of descriptive words, when well written, shares the imagination of the writer with those who read. It brings the reader in line with the world created by the writer. Well done.<br /><br />I can see the care you have taken with spelling and punctuation. Again, well done. <br /><br />My only suggestion might be for your last four sentences where you might need small adjustments. As an example, here is one sentence with a small change..<br /><br />The only company is two dead flies and a living moth,<br /><br />Using "being" would make this sentence more like a phrase after a comma but this is just my thought. You are the writer.<br /><br />With your creative imagination, skill with descriptive language and developing skills as a writer, I hope you have more chances to enter the 100WC. Writers should share their adventures with the world.<br /><br />Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)<br />Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia<br />rmannellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10325881715643049499noreply@blogger.com