tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post5297306106393915276..comments2023-06-10T12:33:38.919+01:00Comments on 100 Word Challenge @ The Richmond School: … then when I looked out of the plane window…by CaitlinDavid Ballhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07808890305733269826noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-7087764372211429012015-03-09T12:14:01.355+00:002015-03-09T12:14:01.355+00:00I like your story because you used good descriptio...I like your story because you used good description. My Favourite part was the bit where the school of dolphins swam past.<br />By AnnabelleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-75245549413117638042015-03-09T12:12:52.572+00:002015-03-09T12:12:52.572+00:00I really liked your 100 word challenge because you...I really liked your 100 word challenge because you described how the plane landed and you included the prompt.<br /> by EleanorAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-36815200889555848762015-03-09T12:05:32.637+00:002015-03-09T12:05:32.637+00:00 I like this story you are very good at doing thes... I like this story you are very good at doing these things and you used description and i like the bit when you put Then when I looked out of the plane window a beautiful school of dolphins swam past us i liked that bit you did a very good job well done Caitlin.<br /><br />By Olivia<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-1759364886901228752015-03-09T12:03:35.037+00:002015-03-09T12:03:35.037+00:00I like your story a lot. My favorite animals are d...I like your story a lot. My favorite animals are dolphins. I really get a picture about your story.<br />By JessicaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-84250116023749847442015-03-09T12:00:35.791+00:002015-03-09T12:00:35.791+00:00I love your story, its very good description and I...I love your story, its very good description and I like the build up to it and the part about the dolphins. You can really get a picture of where you are in the story. Grace Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com