tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post5572401623595381593..comments2023-06-10T12:33:38.919+01:00Comments on 100 Word Challenge @ The Richmond School: Hard Beautiful Brown Worried Camera by CloudDavid Ballhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07808890305733269826noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-77039153801452767322017-04-05T00:13:04.539+01:002017-04-05T00:13:04.539+01:00Hello Cloud,
A cooking disaster is a real possibi...Hello Cloud,<br /><br />A cooking disaster is a real possibility when we're in a rush because cooking a cake can't be done quickly. In your story, everything worked out for the better and grandma had a wonderful birthday. Well done for effectively using the five prompt words and creating an interesting story. <br /><br />The care you have taken with spelling, punctuation and grammar demonstrates your growing skills as a writer. Your opening sentence was a good example of speech and the use of an exclamation mark. Again, well done.<br /><br />I hope you have the opportunity to continue entering the 100WC. I know your school year is about to end but, perhaps as you move on in grade, the opportunities will be there. Good writers should share their adventures.<br /><br />Ross Mannell<br />Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australiarmannellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10325881715643049499noreply@blogger.com