tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post5922292060169487948..comments2023-06-10T12:33:38.919+01:00Comments on 100 Word Challenge @ The Richmond School: … then when I looked out of the plane window… by HarveyDavid Ballhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07808890305733269826noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-63277856027049553132015-03-09T12:13:19.721+00:002015-03-09T12:13:19.721+00:00Its O.K but some of it didn't make senseIts O.K but some of it didn't make sense Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-7252494630463398932015-03-09T12:09:59.417+00:002015-03-09T12:09:59.417+00:00Well done you did a good job and you used descript...Well done you did a good job and you used description and i liked the bit when you put Eventually I opened my eyes then when I looked out of the plane window it was amazing what a view my nerves had gone i liked that bit.<br /><br />By OliviaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-41025327840507470782015-03-09T12:09:33.861+00:002015-03-09T12:09:33.861+00:00I think its goodI think its goodAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-10832921254791680332015-03-09T12:09:10.901+00:002015-03-09T12:09:10.901+00:00I loved your little story because that's what ...I loved your little story because that's what I was like on my first flight.<br />Will JAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-4401749539558697372015-03-09T12:02:18.278+00:002015-03-09T12:02:18.278+00:00Well done you have done a really good job at build...Well done you have done a really good job at building up to the take of also i like the way you started it of. Finally you did a good job at describing the plane.<br />by CaitlinAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-24222820981579815392015-03-09T12:02:16.026+00:002015-03-09T12:02:16.026+00:00Great story Harvey, I like the story and I also li...Great story Harvey, I like the story and I also like the picture.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com