tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post2573478973889815367..comments2023-06-10T12:33:38.919+01:00Comments on 100 Word Challenge @ The Richmond School: Suddenly by RhiannaDavid Ballhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07808890305733269826noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-71625161499541885702016-05-15T16:45:12.641+01:002016-05-15T16:45:12.641+01:00Great stort Rhianna. Dramatic ending.
GeorginaGreat stort Rhianna. Dramatic ending.<br />GeorginaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-11327740375979104072016-05-12T17:52:51.068+01:002016-05-12T17:52:51.068+01:00I think the story was quite well written but maybe...I think the story was quite well written but maybe add a bit more detail but overall the story was goodAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-54829178031948488402016-05-11T00:07:22.706+01:002016-05-11T00:07:22.706+01:00Hello Rhianna,
Truth and Dare can be a very dange...Hello Rhianna,<br /><br />Truth and Dare can be a very dangerous game when facing someone with a good imagination and sense of mischief. It then becomes a game of whether to risk a dare or face a truth. If the dare you faced was above, I wonder how bad the truth might have been? Well done.<br /><br />You have made good use of the prompt word. Alarms can wake you suddenly. I see you have also taken care with spelling and punctuation, a sign of your developing writing skills. Again, well done.<br /><br />I hope you can continue entering the 100WC. I think you must have many more good ideas and stories to share in the future.<br /><br />Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)<br />Teacher (retired), N.S.W., AustraliaRoss Mannell (Team 100WC)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14298840758636420196noreply@blogger.com