tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post3512651435138946347..comments2023-06-10T12:33:38.919+01:00Comments on 100 Word Challenge @ The Richmond School: Mia …as they turned the corner… 100WC#26David Ballhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07808890305733269826noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-72037066338758769492015-03-30T20:26:31.705+01:002015-03-30T20:26:31.705+01:00Hi Mia
This is a really interesting 100 word chal...Hi Mia <br />This is a really interesting 100 word challenge and I like the way you have written it almost as two short pieces that link. You created a real sense of tension in the first section with the monsters coming after you and then you changed the whole atmosphere with the introduction of your parents anniversary - a nice happy ending! Well done. <br />Ms O'Keeffe (team 100wc) <br />Ireland msokeeffehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02882736941352317751noreply@blogger.com