tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post3979808399113885572..comments2023-06-10T12:33:38.919+01:00Comments on 100 Word Challenge @ The Richmond School: Talking statues by LexiDavid Ballhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07808890305733269826noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-52414738465653522082018-02-04T19:19:47.807+00:002018-02-04T19:19:47.807+00:00What a tense and exciting story Lexi! And what a c...What a tense and exciting story Lexi! And what a cliffhanger to end on; what on earth happened next? Your opening sentence immediately caught my attention as a reader, but you then maintained that high standard by subtle changes to the verb each time you introduced new dialogue: "shouted," "screamed" and "implored."<br />I'll be recommending your story for this week's Showcase. Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.Mr G, Sheffield, UK (Team 100WC)https://100wc.netnoreply@blogger.com