tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post6538008052850376772..comments2023-06-10T12:33:38.919+01:00Comments on 100 Word Challenge @ The Richmond School: ...we were moving very fast... by BenDavid Ballhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07808890305733269826noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8192955641160035348.post-42423389741038549702018-02-22T16:01:32.078+00:002018-02-22T16:01:32.078+00:00Hi Ben,
Samantha sounds awesome! I hope we get to ...Hi Ben,<br />Samantha sounds awesome! I hope we get to hear more about her trip to the Moon in your next stories. In terms of advice, I think your use of verb tenses could be a bit more consistent as you switch between past and present.<br />Is Samantha on her own on her trip to the Moon? Why is she upset it will take three days to get there? These are some questions you might want to consider if you want to write some more about her! Well done!<br />All best,<br />Elise (Team100) :) Elise (Team100)https://100wc.net/noreply@blogger.com