It was the day I was going to try the fizziest
sweet in the world. When I walked to my mum’s car. I saw the light blue sky
with the pale, white clouds. When I looked up, at the sweet place I smelt lots
of lovely sweets. Then the man shouted to me saying are you ready to try it I
was, ‘Like of course!’ But
it made my tongue tingle which I hate a lot so that wasn't very good. The
sweet was red and white striped it smelt delicious but really isn’t. Saturday, 6 June 2015
…but it made my tongue tingle…, Mia
It was the day I was going to try the fizziest
sweet in the world. When I walked to my mum’s car. I saw the light blue sky
with the pale, white clouds. When I looked up, at the sweet place I smelt lots
of lovely sweets. Then the man shouted to me saying are you ready to try it I
was, ‘Like of course!’ But
it made my tongue tingle which I hate a lot so that wasn't very good. The
sweet was red and white striped it smelt delicious but really isn’t. 
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