Saturday 14 December 2013

Tarne 100WC#15

I was trapped I looked around and there was paint brushes and paint with a clean, white canvas just sat there in a lonely room waiting to be used. Aside of the door there was a lever and I wondered what it did but the only way to find out is to pull it. So as scared as ever I pulled the lever and some of the bricks came back which led to a door. I was confused should I go through I thought to myself. I had to take the risk so I walked through the door and gasped.

Rocco 100WC#15

One day I decided to go to the park. Then I decided to climb the biggest tree there but I felt quite a strange feeling. But I decided to climb it any way. When I got to the top of the tree I fell in agony and pain from a bullet to the head. Weirdly when I hit the ground I went through it. Also when I went through the ground I could see a mirror that looked like crystal. It was very weird because I started being chased by a monster. Then I decided to kick the monster to death.

Anh 100WC#15

Midnight. Silence roamed the village of Micklesberry. The people lay in their beds, frozen with terror as a ghostly wailing echoed throughout the deserted streets. The art gallery was always full of secret passage ways and mysterious happenings but that night something different was stirring. One of the museum's most prized possessions was casting a light. This painting was infamous but nevertheless at the gallery. Jack and Lucy were the town's troublemakers and they decided to spend a night at the museum to wreck to havoc. But the picture started smiling and crept to the door where the children were...

The crystal mirror by Millie O 100WC#15


Once there lived a mother and daughter who always fell out and one night they were snug in their beds and……they heard a roaring sound and quickly ran to the window to see what it was but couldn’t see anything so they went in the dark and when they got closer trapped!!!!!!!”This is your entire fault” Emily/daughter shouted.

“Well I’m sorry” snarled mum “it’s not my fault”. So they agreed that it wasn’t their fault and found a way out and when they got home the realised that if they work together they can do anything together.

Romola 100WC#15

In the aboriginal part of Australia night fall fell and it was time for old stories. First my cousin Akala told her story.


Once upon a time in the village of Capashee a snake called Kip was slithering around and doing snake things, when it stumbled across a mirror. Kip didn't know it was him. The snake charged at the mirror and broke it. That was when he found out that is wasn't any old mirror it was THEE Crystal Mirror and it had a portal to another dimension. The portal led to Snakesville and he lived happily ever after.

Friday 13 December 2013

The Mirror by Amy 100WC#15


This story is going to be about the future Mirror.

One day I was awoken by a strange sound, ”say mirror, mirror," said the strange sound.

I crept out of bed to see what the strange sound was as I opened the door there stood a shiny mirror staring at me. ”Hello I’m the future mirror , Would you like to see you being born?”

“Okay,” I said uncertainly. The mirror showed when I was born it was really memorable. I thought the mirror was quite magical because he can do loads of stuff. ”Good bye,” he said nicely.

Lewis 100WC#15

Once there was a man called Tim.  He was a good man until he got put in jail for robbing a bank. 
He was put in a dungeon for a long time! Soon after another man called Tom got put in this dungeon.  They were soon good friends, it was a sad life for them until one day they were given a crystal mirror and lots of art materials.

They discovered that when they painted on the crystal mirror they were teleported to the place they had painted but for only two hours.  The men enjoyed exploring different places everyday. 




Wednesday 11 December 2013

Joshua 100WC#15

Tom and James slowly approached the easel. They both looked very shocked when they found it in the cellar about 15 minutes ago. They were thinking about what to do, should they tell their mum or should they keep it a secret? Then at that point they just realised there were paints at the bottom of the easel. Suddenly the easel started to rattle. Then it started sucking up the paints and the light and the wooden planks on the floor and then it sucked up them they managed to hold on. Then they got sucked in, in a second.

Leah 100WC#15

Amelia was locked in a cellar with just bread and water to last her each day. One day when she awoke after an eight hour sleep she saw an easel with paint brushes and different textures of paint with one million sheets of blank paper.
Five minutes after that she had played around and discovered that it could make drawings come to life. 
She drew two chocolate brown ponies galloping away and suddenly out of the cellar window she saw two ponies galloping away into the sunset. 
Every day she created stunning scenery and turned her beautiful dreams into reality.

Talia 100WC#15

Once there was a beautiful girl called Millie and lived with her husband Dave in a mysterious house. In the past there had been some weird things happening so the couple went to explore. It was a massive house so it took ages to find the secret dungeon. That has a crystal mirror that was where people said people go missing. Then Dave said to her Millie don’t go in the mirror ever. So they both went out and got ready for bed. When Dave drifted off Millie went to the mirror and suddenly stepped back and ran in it…

Tilly 100WC#15

They walked into the room. The easel stood there, with a blank, sparkling canvas sitting on it, just waiting to be painted on. The girl crept forwards, picked up a paintbrush, and started to open a pot. "No!" he cried, as he pushed the pot out of the girl’s hands. "Stop! How do we know that this is not all a trick?" The girl just stared at him. "Why do expect me to believe that?" she snapped. "We enter a room that we have never seen before, and it is just a trick is it?" Suddenly she started to paint.

The art room by Finlay 100WC#15

One sad and colourless day, there lived two children, one called Tom and the other called Max. Together they both wanted to bring back the colourful world. That day as Tom woke up he thought of an idea. In his house there was a small basement. Since Tom had been growing up he had always been wondering what was behind it so he suddenly called Max. He came round and they strolled into the basement. In the basement was a tiny art room! Immediately after that Max pressed a button that made everything come to life.



Paris 100WC#15

Then there were… lots of flying pencils everywhere hitting everyone on their heads they all needed to duck down there were more than 20 pencils flying everywhere. In a flash all the experiments all fizzed up and exploded out just like a firework. Then it was really slippery and all the work people started falling and slipping on all the pencils, then there was even more then 40 pencils well it looked like it a lot more than that but I was just looking around but it looked like it. They doors were open so all the pencils flew out.

Lettia 100WC#15

As we were left in the dungeon we discovered that there were some paints and a canvas. Then suddenly the goblin shouted, “Paint me a picture, NOW!!!” So off we went trying to paint the best picture ever. We both decided to paint a self-portrait of the goblin. Swish, swish, swish, swish that was the sound of the paintbrush on the canvas. Wow!! The piece of art was brilliant. “Not bad for one day of work.”
“Have you finished then?” the goblin asked. “May I have a look?”
“Sure!”
“It is beautiful. You can go now then.”




Ruby 100WC#15

Once there lived two sisters who absolutely hated each other Emma wanted revenge at her other sister Kristy so one day Emma made up a plan to kill her but I don’t think that went how she planned it because it went awfully wrong. But Emma didn't know that until Monday but today is Saturday. She went to an old lady and asked her how to get revenge on her sister the old women gave Emma a mirror she asked the old lady how would the mirror help me get revenge on Kristy and the old lady said you will.

Saturday 7 December 2013

...and then the noise stopped...by Romola

My mum and I were having a girly day out when we went in an expensive shop. Just before we stepped in the shop a screeching alarm blared out all around the shop. The alarm was extremely loud but the alarm didn't stop us from shopping. It had been about five to six minutes and the alarm was still going off. In that time we had managed to to buy everything we needed. When we got to the till my mum asked why they didn't do anything about the alarm. They didn't hear it. At that moment the noise stopped.

...and the noise stopped... by Neizan


One dark and wild night there was a noise that for a while was quite annoying, suddenly there was a big shriek that came from the near door behind the livening room and then the noise stopped, for a while I was okay but then the noise started again…


Soon I realized that I was being watched by somebody. Only about 10 seconds later a princess looking girl appeared, then I saw that the princess looking girl was wearing a pink sleeping beauty dress and she even had blond, shiny, gold and silky hair like the cartoon character sleeping beauty, the dress also had glitter.

Friday 6 December 2013

...and the noise stopped... by Giuseppe

 …and then the noises stopped... when the noise stopped I got the key and slowly opened the door which creaked as it opened. I went downstairs slowly and quietly until I stepped on a patch of soil which was not meant to be there, “What the …” I said in a soft voice and carefully I started walking until I tripped over something. I looked back and it was a tombstone like a grave. I rubbed the dust off and it was my father, Isaac Carta (here lies Isaac Carta killed by Babs Carta) I gasped and ran to my mother and said, “DIE!”…

...and the noise stopped... by Lettia

Boom!!! The sound was horrendous, as next doors house was under flames. Crying and screaming, then suddenly, the noise stopped.

Quickly after, the sound was followed by the noise of an engine. Horrible cries of pain still rang in my ears. My mum told me to stay calm, and to stay with the people who were lucky to get out. One of our neighbours (who was in the fire) told us how horrible it was. At the end, I was in tears as the people were gone in the ambulance. I felt really bad, as they left.

...and the noise stopped... by Paris

And then the noise stopped with fireworks exploding in the air give all the kids a heart attack… And then lots of family shouting and screaming about all the noise in the cottage. The rides stopped as well will everybody on them and the rollercoaster stopped too. There was a person call John who set all the fireworks off not a lot of people like him because he is a trouble maker I don ’t think any one likes him in the whole wide world…. When he was setting of the fireworks he has a grin on his face.

Everybody ran away back home.

..and the noise stopped... by Finlay

Sam was lying in bed silently as his parent chatted along. Suddenly after that Sam woke up with a noise of a huge bang. Terrified he pulled his bed covers right over him trying not to hear the incredibly huge sound. But then it struck again and Sam was not happy at all! After all of this he sprinted right down the dark, gloomy stair case to tell his unknown parents. After all they did not listen. Because of this he strolled outside to see what was going on and then the noise stopped immediately.

...and the noise stopped... by Ruby

Then the noise stopped all of a sudden out came a clown it scared John to death he had a mini heart attack his friend Michael set the trap up to scare John because on Halloween John scared Michael to death so today was his pay back day they always do it so it is not an big issue and plus they like doing it. But I can guarantee one day they will both have a heart attack some day of the week and possibly die in my opinion but I doubt they will have a heart attack. But Michael and John never fell out.

...and the noise stopped... by Jake

One warm sunny morning I ZOOMED down stairs. I quirkily slurped my breakfast up, grabbed the shiny gold key, opened the door, jumped on to my shiny red scooter and scooted off to the haunted mansion down Freak Street. I carefully inserted the golden key into the rusty old key hole. I opened the door carefully then it screeched open and I could see the insides of the ancient house which once a quirky 17th century family used to live in. I saw a ghost. It freakishly screamed at me then erratically flew at me, I screamed running in circles and then the noise stopped!

...and the noise stopped... by Lewis

And then the noise stopped...
"Did you hear that ferocious noise?  My ears hurt so much!"

"Do you want to explore?" They decided to have a look around and went to the kitchen.  They didn't find anything that could have made such a terrible noise.  After that they decided to look in the attic to see if it was an owl or some sort of animal that could have come in through the attic window that Dad sometimes opened, they found nothing.  Then they went to look in the living room to see if it was their dog Paddy, it was, she had had puppies.

...and the noise stopped... by Leah

The wind was howling it got louder and louder then suddenly the noise stopped. The petrified children screamed as loud as they could and then they ran as fast as their little legs would carry them. Nearly a fast as a bold black panther. Then the noise suddenly started again. The door slammed shut and then there was a noise of a door locking. It went silent; you could almost hear a pin drop. What had happened? The roaring wind growled viciously. Meanwhile the terrified children screamed so loud that it would pierce your own eardrum. Who locked the door? It was a mysteriously strange…

...and the noise stopped... by Amy

One very strange day there was a terrible sound that was never heard before. This sound wasn’t just any old sound it was the strangest sound ever before. Everybody was searching for the most mysterious sound but it was nowhere to be found. The sound went on for hours and people were also searching everywhere. Could it be a tornado, people thought?
It was a quite frightening sound which wasn’t popular because no one has heard it before. All of a sudden the noise had stopped everyone started to calm down. The weird thing was no one knew what the sound was………

...and the noise stopped... by Joshua

There was a lot of banging for a couple of seconds and then the noise stopped. The 2 boys climbed the stair case very slowly until they reached the top of the stairs. It was very dark so they tried to find the light switch. When they found the light switch it did not work. They got very worried and dashed to the stair case to run down but they heard a rush of wind. They turned around to see what it was but there was nothing there. Then they heard the noise again. Now they were really scared. BANG.

...and the noise stopped... by Anh

Whoosh...trees were swept away. Houses were taken higher and higher into the abyss. Helpless people clinging onto trees with their fingernails yet nothing would stop them from being sucked up by the destroyer.
 An eerie scream would echo throughout Skegness as it would devour each and every victim. This was the scene on that dreadful day full of terror and fear yet I am still here to tell the tale. You see, this tornado was centred inside the Clock Tower and little did we know that the person that started off this tornado planned this all those years ago...

...and the noise stopped... by Talia

On a dark night I was in town with my family. All was calm and quiet until a horrible buzzing noise came from no were and then the noise stopped. I looked behind me and there was a ginourmous swarm of angry wasps! All of them was shaking then pointy spiky stings at us RUNNNNNNNNN! So we did a fast as we could but the wasps was catching up with me so then I got some knives from the chippy. I swung them at them but instead of them getting killed their arms became knives so they became what they ate! What can we do?

...and the noise stopped... by Tilly

And then the noise stopped. We all calmed down. But then it started again. The horrible howling, of what we didn't know.We were all screaming and running, as we were in the park. We didn't know what to do. Suddenly, Jack saw a shadow dart through the forest in the time it would have taken a cheetah. He stuttered, " I t-t-t-t-think I j-j-j-just saw what was making the n-n-n-noise." He rushed into the forest, and of course I had to follow him, so we both crept through, trying to dodge any sticks on the ground.He suddenly stopped dead.

... and the noise stopped... by Olivia

Oooo!!! And the noise stopped.
“What is that noise?” the girl asked.
“That is the noise of the spirits that are trapped here,” said Angelica in a stern voice.
“But...”
“But what?”
“Well I thought when someone died they went to heaven or …below.”
“Well you thought wrong.”
“Please tell me about it, I’m eager to know.”
“Fine it only happens if you can’t find a light, so basically if you can, you do go to heaven...”
“Going off that subject, where next?” said the girl excitedly.
“Well next we go to the basement...”

“Why the basement? Not the basement, please.”

Saturday 30 November 2013

Talia 100WC#13

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He took a step forward! Suddenly as fast as lightning an enormous creature came out of no were “it’s so ugly, I can hardly describe it!” Then it roared you could see strings of saliva stuck to its teeth.

“Run for your life!”


“Arrrrrrrrrrh!” One of them took a tumble and unfortunately got eaten up by the creature. It did not crunch on him it just swallowed him hole! He landed with a bump and saw people at first he thought he was imagining it at first but they was real all right. Who will save them nobody knows!

Anh 100WC#13

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The request was unheard. A blood-sucking creature staggered its way towards the friends and sent out a sticky tar connecting the brother's feet to the ground. They, froze in fear and cold yet Sam managed out a shrill, "help!" The answer they received was rain, just as the beast let out a manic laughter. Hope was leaving and soon almost all hope was gone. "Get in,” shouted a girl wearing a cape and top saying S.S, in a limousine. She shot some acid onto the substance and they ran in the vehicle just as the monster swore its revenge...

Joshua 100WC#13

Suddenly a man came behind them and grabbed them both and pressed a gun in the throat. They stayed extremely still. Then one of them turned around in a flash and grabbed the gun. Then he noticed something that was so astonishing. It was his brother. The last time he saw him was when he was only 15 years old when his dad died and then they both lived alone. They were both very shocked to see each other. He chucked the gun of the top of the building. Everything went silent. Then his brother ran of and left forever.

Tilly 100WC#13

Girl: Not just him. Her!
Boy: I said a minute ago, we have to get out of here!
Girl: Come on, quickly! They’re casting a spell! The door is shrinking!
Boy: I thought they stopped doing magic?
Girl: No, they still do it to stop us, because we are their arch nemeses. Do you remember why because I forgot!
Boy: Because they want to be the only brother and sister in the world because we are the only ones left, us and them.
Girl: Oh yeah, but the door has disappeared!
Suddenly a wizard appears.

Wizard: Well this is awkward!

Amy 100WC#13

Suddenly a ginormous man with pointy yellow teeth appeared as they were being watched they assumed that he was the one that was watching him because his yellow teeth looked like descries.

They weren’t taking no for an answer. As the day began he was still stood glaring at the two people’s eyes, they began to get a little scared. "I think we should run! whispered, Sarah. The sprinted around the garden, threw bushes, around corners until the got to a fantastic hiding place. All of a sudden there was a strange voice and it was the spooky man…

Leah 100WC#13

The door opened slowly along with a strange creaking noise, the two children started to run as fast as their little legs could carry them! The man followed them with an object in his hand….
Panting Billy said “I think that we lost him [pant pant]”
“Hey kids, what is the matter? Oh, I see the problem, Mater Samuels is chasing you. Don’t worry I will help you!” BOOM! BANG! POW! “Now Mater will never bother you or anybody else again!” City superhero screamed.
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“I cannot believe that you just saved us from our own horror story, very much appreciated.”

Summer 100WC#13

As Dave and Angela turned to run away, they heard a voice shout out, “Heeeelllppp!”
They stopped and looked at each other and turned back towards the scary house.  They walked slowly back and opened the creaky front door shouting, “Hellooo!”
Dave whispered to Angela, “He must be hurt maybe the stories we’ve heard about him aren’t true.” Angela said “Well I think we should be very careful.”

 “Help,” they heard the voice again, they walked through the house to the room where they heard the noise, they opened the door and there was a blinding flash of light. Arrrrrgggghhhhh!

Ruby 100WC#13

“No it’s her my worst enemy she used to be my friend when I was little in high school but she has changed a lot we need to go otherwise we will get beaten up really bad and you will get a black eye. Do you really want to get to black eyes?”
“No”
“Well then let’s go ok then go run. Do you realise that she was the fastest girl in our class”
“Yes but you said that she has changed a lot.”
“Yes but he hasn’t changed her sport allot what about if he has.”

“She will have.”

Finlay 100WC#13

Strolling around his front garden he saw a ginormous man! The man had huge teeth as he opened his mouth and a yellow pointy nose and he wore a tiny party hat he also wore some very peculiar clothes they looked like they were clowns cloths.
It was like he was being watched he shouted to the amazing clown “what is your name and talks don’t be afraid”! But there was no answer from the clown. All it did was stand still quietly and silently. It got quite scary so I sprinted into my house. And the clown never returned.

Paris 100WC#13

Suddenly zombies came out and sour them two trying to break into the house and trying to case them two back to their own house. Then the bad boy realized it were his old friend but dint really care just ran and ran till he caught them all the neighbours woke up because it were about 12.00 midnight. Then they came out and tried to save them but they fought that they was trying to catch them. Then they heard a massive noise just like a police car with all the stress they were having in the large cottage.

Tarne 100WC#13


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Lettia 100WC#13

Quick run!! It’s him.
Who, what, why are we even running?
I have told you. It’s him. The burglar. He was in the news and everything.
The news!!
Yeah, he stole 3 million pounds from the bank.
Really?
Of course, but it’s bad, the police couldn’t catch him.
What? So he could be stealing right now!!
Yeah! Oh of course. I think we need to call the police.
Well do you have a phone?
Yeah it’s in my pocket…… Hello, police, I need to report the burglar from the news.

Well I am on my way, alright...

Lili 100WC#13

Quick run!!! Its her, what who, what the hell are you talking about its that girl she tries to kill people ok let’s just get out of here, run she’s chasing us she’s a evil human / spirit I’m grabbing my car and getting out of here no get back see you later I’m leaving you here. I’m going to run for my life and I’ve got away I hope my friend feels sorry for me I just bet he misses me loads I’m just going to see him but I really miss him.

Romola 100WC#13

“WAIT I can't run fast please wait for me!” he cried.

“I’m sorry mate but you're on your own I can’t risk my own life for you.” I shouted.

For the young man shouting was a really bad idea Madeline a girl who used to live there who died, woke up. She hadn’t woken up in years or eaten and now the two young men were going to be Madeline’s next victim. They ran as fast as they could but in most stories zombies couldn’t run but in fact Madeline wasn't a zombie she was young girl that slept heavily.

Lewis 100WC#13



RUN he is chasing us, hurry! Where do we go now he has got us cornered? "I'm coming!" said the ferocious man. Bob and Jim kept running and ran through a very dark and gloomy forest until the man almost caught them up! Quick climb up the tree and hopefully he won't see us. Bob and Jim managed to hide up the tree and the scary man didn‘t see them and ran straight past. Bob whispered, "Wow that was close." The two men climbed down quietly and crept back the way they had come until they were safely home again!

Sunday 24 November 2013

New Challenge - Week 13

0041 Week#13
100 Word Challenge Homework

http://100wc.net/

Neizan - Letter in a Bottle

Dear……………………. I know that you and all of the children in the Philippines have and still are having an extremely tough time there, most children have lost parents. If you are one of those children that have lost family and are feeling upset and absolutely heart broken, then read the rest of this letter and there will be something that will keep you moving on and try to not lose confidence ether. I hope that soon it will be back to normal. Reaching for your career goal, as this will make you exited for what is next in your life.

Saturday 23 November 2013

Talia - Letter in a bottle

Hope for the best but it will only work if you believe in yourself and other people. If you do you could make a village an actual village which you can live in a house in it and live a happy life. Not just you to make a village but to encourage other people to do is well. But it could happen if you work together help each other and share plus comfort people that have been through a bad time like lost a family member or members. Also wish that something like this wouldn’t happen again.

Anh - Letter in a bottle

Hello. I am aware of your recent happenings. I have no idea who has this. If you look carefully inside my bottle you will find some food for one, which will last for one day. I know it’s not much so I have some help. You know there are more people like you that are willing to help. Find them. Start a village. Don’t give up hope! Sooner or later you will be rewarded. In groups you can forage for food and water! There must be some people able to help! If all else fails, use the treasure map below...

Joshua - Letter in a bottle

Do not worry about anything. Even though you have got off to a rough start everything will turn out perfectly in the end, so just be strong and you will have your normal life back as you were before this terrible storm had come. In a few days you will have your own house with your mum and dad and be safe until that happens. People will look after you and will take care of you and will send you money for the rest of your life. Take care. But never give up hope until that day.

Tilly - Letter in a bottle

Dear children in the Philippines,

I am very sorry about what has happened to you. If you have some bits and pieces all over the place, you could maybe rip and cut some bits up and slot them together, so you can have just a little make-shift shelter. I hope everything gets ok in the end, and that you have some money and food. Everything will turn out fine, and if you all stick together and stay strong, you will survive and be fine. I am sorry you have lost family and relatives, and hope you will be fine.

Amy - Letter in a bottle

A letter to the Philippines.
Dear children,
I have heard about the dreadful, frightening storm you have had. I feel so sad for you and wish I could help but then there is one thing I will suggest, I suggest you keep hoping and keep going building things and helping and I’m sure people will help and give money. Adults there would be extremely grateful if you helped. I know it’s tough but never give keep trying. I’m sure soon it will get fixed soon and everyone will be happy again. Wish you all the best luck. Bye.

Leah - Letter in a bottle

Hello
I know that it is tough for you after the storms and you are struggling for supplies. I saw some have lost family and homes but I am writing to tell you there is hope.
The American military are coming to help you with water, food and survival objects. This is a sad time, but it will get better. You can rebuild together. I am sorry that you are probably living on the streets but there is hope, trust me there is hope for you. There are aeroplanes coming to get you, it is okay. Aid is coming.
Leah.

Millie O - Letter in a bottle

To whoever reads my message,
Here in England I watched the news and discovered the devastation of the typhoon that came in to your country and made life change. My heart sank as I imagined the pain that you’re feeling. Not only losing your home and belongings but the tragedy of losing loved ones. I feel really sorry for those who died and suffered. I'm sending love and hope to give each and every one of you to give you the courage to keep smiling and stay strong. Help is coming your way never give up.

I'm thinking of you.

Ruby - Letter in a bottle

Hello my name is Ruby. I heard the news. I am so sorry. I would help you but I am many miles away. I am really sorry I hope you all get better soon I will support you as long as I can and if I can I will ask other people to and all my teachers. Actually, I am at a charity club now; I will bring it up for you and hope we can all support you. I will help you if I can. I am sure we all can and we all wish you lots of luck.

Finlay - Letter in a bottle

Typhoon Haiyan destroyed your country nine days ago. Most countries of the world are trying to send you lots of supplies and some help. We are also bringing over Doctors and nurses to help with the people that have been wounded. My family have donated some money to try and help you get fresh water and food. Survivors are being found each and every day so we hope you find your loved ones and friends. I know it must be hard but be positive help is on its way. Do not give up hope supplies will be with you soon.   

Tarne - Letter in a bottle

Dear friend,
I know there have been bad times for you and your family. Hopefully it will all be ok as people all over the world are sending food and water. The world is pulling together and you will get your life back I promise. Your situation will start to improve as help gets to you and your life will be better soon. I hope you can imagine a better future in your country and I also wish this for you. Happiness will spread around as your country is rebuilt and you can all be happy again.  I wish you well.

Millie C Letter in a bottle

Hello my name is Millie C and I am writing to you today to tell you that you should not give up because the Typhoon will be over soon and all you need is hope. People like me are very lucky but think they're not, I think I am very lucky because England’s not getting all these Hurricanes, Storms, Tornadoes and Typhoons. Most of England is trying to help you and stop children and babies suffering. Babies and children don't suffer here and live a happy life and we think it shouldn't happen over there. DON'T SUFFER LIVE LIFE!

Romola - Letter in a bottle

Hello I am really sorry for your terrible house loss. If I was in your position I don't know how I would cope and now I am going to give you a few tips I have learnt in some books I have read. First, all you need to think about is hope, you need to be hopeful and phenomenal things will happen, and because you were hopeful people started to bring you food and water. If you all gather up to rebuild your houses and after all the food comes and the houses are built the Philippines will be reborn.

Sunday 17 November 2013

A Letter in a Bottle


From www.100wc.net 
"As you will all know I'm sure, there has been a terrible disaster in the Philippines caused by Typhoon Haiyan. Whole towns have been destroyed and thousands of people have died. Many children will have lost their homes and parents.
The Disasters  Emergency Committee here in the UK has set up an appeal to raise funds to help. World Vision is a charity that is working with the DEC and they have set up a project called ‘Bottles of Hope’. This is an appeal for people to fill a water bottle with coins and send them what they save.
They have been in touch with 100WC and have asked if we can help. They know that words of support can really make a difference to people who are having a really rough time so this week’s prompt is to write:
A Letter in a BottleSend some encouragement and hope to those children in the Philippines so that they have the strength and courage to carry on. As usual, it is only to be 100 words long."
Closing date Saturday 23rd November (Friday 22nd November for entries on paper)

Friday 15 November 2013

Millie C #11 Remembering

My holiday in Spain was amazing and when I got there I got to see papa and carol. I got to see Murphy, Casey and Molly too. Molly is a new dog and is a small tiny one which is a mix between something but were not really sure yet. I went in the pool every day and on the third day everyone jumped in. The next two days me Ewan (my brother) me papa and dad were chopping trees down while mum and Carol were sat outside and chatted. Me and Ewan took turns driving the tractor.

Sarah #11 Remembering

You must always remember poppy day, it’s a time to say thank you to the people that went to war and the people that helped to save the day. People wonder, why do we have to wear a poppy? Well it is to tell other people that you care about the people in the war and you wear a poppy in pride and will never forget why they went to war.
Maybe someday you will wear a poppy like your friends or your family because now you know that wearing a poppy is a brilliant thing to do.

Rocco #11 Remembering

During the Second World War one of the most dangerous jobs was to be a rear gunner. It was the rear gunner’s job to defend his aircraft from any enemy attacking from the rear.
This was so important because the pilot had to fly the plane and look out for the enemy in front of him but had to trust his rear gunner to keep the aircraft safe from enemy attack at the rear.
My father knew a real life rear gunner on a Lancaster. He remembers stories told by him. His name was John Cox a quietly spoken gentleman.

Olivia #11 Remembering


I woke up this morning, suddenly realising it was Remembrance Day so I jumped out of bed and got dressed. Next I went through my box of things and grabbed my big red poppy. After that I searched for a safety pin but I couldn’t find one so I used a paper clip. 5 minutes later I turned on the television and put on Newsround. The women on the news talked about poppies and how the soldiers in World War One died for Britain. As I walked to school I could see people wearing Remembrance Poppies at the school gate.

Thursday 14 November 2013

Well done Joshua

Joshua's entry for week 10 made it into the 100WC showcase for that week's work - one of 25 pieces chosen out of 1230 entries!
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Leah #11 Remembering


“Why do people wear poppies this time of year?” I heard a woman say.
So I butted in and said, “the reason that we wear poppies is so that you can remember the soldiers that fought in world war one and world war two and all of the other men and women who lost their lives fighting too. We also show our respect by having two minutes silence on the 11th day of the 11th of the month of the 11th hour.”
So that is why we wear poppies.

The soldiers fought in poppy fields when they were at war.

Lewis #11 Remembering

All those people who died in the war and got killed by all the guns, cannons and all the blood. It would have been a horrible sight with all of the blood and all the dead bodies in the battlefield; I wouldn't want to experience because of all the guns and cannons. When the war was over all the poppies grew on the battlefield. I wish World War 1 and 2 never happened, they said that World War 1 was the end of war.

If you wear a poppy the red is the blood and the black is the bullet.

Jake #11 Remembering

As I sat in the aircraft carriers seats, my heart pounded as the carrier slowly landed in the soft smooth soil I readied my rifle, pistol, knife and a helmet to protect my head. I quickly ran out of the carrier. I smelt a strong burning smell in the air. There was smoke all around me. I saw faint shadows of men running as they were shooting their guns at the enemy. I heard men shouting and screaming for their lives. I also heard gun shots flying through the black smoke filled air.
 “Grandad, wake up!” I awoke. I remembered!

Finlay #11 Remembering

Remembrance Day takes place on November the 11th. November is the time of the year when we wear a red poppy in memory of those who sacrificed their lives for us during wars. The eleventh hour of the eleventh day of the eleventh month marks the signing of the armistice, on the eleventh of November, to signal the end of the world war one. At eleven am on 11th November 1918 the guns of the Western Front fell silent after more than four years of continuous warfare. It was named Remembrance Day in the terrible, fighting World War 2!

Neizan #11 Remembering

On the 11th of November it is the celebration of poppy day when people all over the world do a poppy assembly to say that you care about all of the people that died in the wars. We wear poppies because of the solders that fought in the war.
Wearing a poppy shows people that you care about all of those that died and were wounded in the battle or wars. Poppies are also worn because people have had family in the war, or because a friend has had a person in their family and relatives in the war.

Amy #11 Remembering

Remembrance Day
We wear poppies every the 11th of November to celebrate and remember the caring men that fought to death for us. We will always remember every single one forever in our hearts. We call the 11th of November Remembrance Day.
We call it remembrance day because we have to remember all the strong caring men fighting for our country. We are all the most grateful people in the world. We are thankful for all of them and wish we could bring them back and thank them. Rest in peace soldiers and thank you for everything you did.

Millie O #11 Remembering

Swaying poppies make us remember the time the soldiers were fighting for their life time. The people who died by guns, cannons and also bombs. The red represents the blood and the black represents the bullet wound. Everyday poppy day I remember the time of my Nan and me because my Nanny Mavis who used to be in the World War 1 and 2. The kind generous people who were willing to fight in the army. The memory of the army and blood and people who fought in the places and didn't die. That’s what we remember on that day.

Joshua #11 Remembering

The thing that I remember most is when I went on holiday and I was chased by a huge swan. We think we were near its nest or it wanted food. Me and my sister had to run in as fast as we could. I had to dive inside are lodge and shut the lodge door. My mum took lots of pictures of the swan taping against the glass. It took a long time for the swan to go away. When the swan went we throughout lots of biscuits just in case the swan was still there. I was nervous.

Talia #11 Remembering

Once when I went on holiday not so long ago me and my family went on holiday to a place called Kelling Heath. One day me and my brother went on our bikes to explore. We went riding down really narrow paths, on each side there was a long line of very prickly bushes. I hoped I wouldn't fall into them but unfortunately I did and it was particularly painful. An hour later I had about one hundred dots on my left leg and fifty on my left arm. But now I think it is very funny plus painful!

Lettia #11 Remembering

I was walking down the street to find that a poppy field was close by, so I walked up to pay my respects. The next morning I found out that the service was about the soldiers that died in the war. There was a man playing the trumpet, the lovely tune went on and on. Near the end, one of our teachers pulled a rope and down came millions of poppies. I will never forget that day when I saw that poppy field. The poppies are to remember the brilliant soldiers that died in the horrible war.

Romola #11 Remembering

Going on holiday to Singapore was one of my best experiences of my life. With my family to make it a holiday to remember we all went to a theme park called universal studios. We went to see which ride we wanted to go on we went on lots of exciting rides and one of the rides I remember the most was called the mummy. The mummy sounded like a fun ride but actually it was a scary ride. I was very scared and sat next to my mum, the ride started and we whizzed round and round the track.

Ruby #11 Remembering

Going on holiday was my best experience of my life because I can remember everything. It was awesome it was always sunny and the people are so polite to you. I met two waiters called Seed and Mishmish they were always very kind. I went to Egypt it was amazing. I didn't meet a lot of English people but I met one she was called Jessica and her mischievous little sister was called Emily she was adorable and so cute I love her. They were all very kind. I love Egypt it is awesome. I loved it.

Anh #11 Remembering

I will remember.
I will remember the unlucky ones that died.
I will remember the sad wives that cried.
I will remember the fierce guns and wire.
I will remember the tanks that never tire.
I will remember the dead men and women.
I will remember they never did sin.
I will remember the killer bombs that blew houses up.
I will remember the spying cameras hidden in small red cups.
I will remember the muddy trenches filled with mice.
I will remember the brave soldiers, hair covered in lice.

I will remember the risk of rolling the fate-deciding dice…

Tuesday 12 November 2013

Tarne WC#11 Remembering

They gave their lives to keep us safe, 
We are grateful for all they gave.
We miss them all and we are free so let us keep the memories.
Think about the things that they did for us, 
Something that we will always touch. 
Love is priceless and safe something you shall always take
Poppies were in the fields on that day,
Possibly may appear one day. 
The risky things they did for us, 
Should live forever let us hope it does.
We wear our poppies today with pride,
To commemorate why they died. 
So silent remembrance on the day.

Sunday 10 November 2013

100 Word Challenge Week 11 - Remembering

Here in the UK and in other parts of the world we are commemorating those who lost their lives in war. Our remembrance day is 11th Nov and I know those of you in other parts of the world also have such events.
I also know that not all of you have an annual event like this so the prompt this week is:
…Remembering….
You can use your 100 words to write about any subject with this topic. Please make sure you stick to the prompt. 

Send me your entry by 5pm on Saturday.

Well done Anh

Anh's entry for week 9 made it into the 100WC showcase for that week's work - one of 28 pieces chosen out of 700 entries!
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Saturday 9 November 2013

Millie O 100 Word Challenge #10

Rushing down to the mossy lakes hoping I would be able to feed them, I saw something strange and peculiar it was a pair of legs but I didn't know whether it was a trick or real, I was worried. After that I phoned my mum saying " You need to come to the lake because I have seen some thing very strange!"
Later that day I thought of an idea I will go up to the lake and see whether they are real. So that is what I did and in the end it was all a TRICK !

Neizan 100 Word Challenge #10

Jane’s picture looks as if someone has fallen into  the river, has been down there for a very long  time and is now dead. The water looks extremely damp and very wet, because the person has probably  been in there for a very long time all of the water, damp  wet leaves and sticks have started to build up on to the  person over time and the dead person is trapped in the  leaves and water. Even if the person was alive it still  would not be able to get out. Jane Hewitt does her job of photographing extremely well.

Friday 8 November 2013

Nico 100 Word Challenge #10


The slimy gooey green boots stuck out the horrible dark gloomy lake meanwhile frogs and toads jumped across the slimy lake. Dragonflies flew in the cold fresh air and flies surrounded the disgusting boots and birds drifted silently as silent as a mouse the wind drifted slowly. Birds sang wasps buzzed snails slithered and ants crawled but the boots just sat there. Trees swished side to side as the grass shined like gold. The clouds drifted of slowly like a slug the sun lit up the blue sky like a ginormous lamp hovering around with the feathery fluffy birds.

Paris 100 Word Challenge #10

There is a man in the dull puddle with green boots just like the dry grass around him. With loads of leafs surrounding him the boots and all the things surrounding him were camouflaged. Nobody saw him but I did with my mum. We wanted to help but we were in a hurry… but we think it was just a boot! It was really strange and a bit scary because it was in a really misty deep puddle. My mum rang my brother to ask him for help. We pulled a boot off and we found a long green sock.

Leah 100 Word Challenge #10

A long time ago there was a dark and gloomy street where the leaves rustled and rattled and where nobody dared go, until one day. That day was when some mysterious wellington boots stuck in a puddle. There were news crews, paramedics, police and helicopters. Nobody knew what was happening yet everybody was interested! Nobody knew if it was just a joke or real life! This was a very big deal for everyone involved. The wellington boots were so filthy, mucky muddy and horrendous that you could not even look at them, nether did anyone else.
Guess what happened next?

Thursday 7 November 2013

Lewis 100 Word Challenge #10


I was walking past a lake and I saw some legs in boots sticking up out of the water. The boots were all covered in mud.  All around the boots in the lake there were lots of bricks and sticks under the water.  The water was muddy and looked green.  There were  leaves floating on top of the water.  The boots looked like men's work boots.  There was a reflection of the legs and wellington boots in the water.  The leaves were autumn colours and the water looked very cold, it would be freezing if you went swimming in it.

Wednesday 6 November 2013

Romola 100 Word Challenge #10

One sunny day my friends and I went to the weird Lake to feed the beautiful wild ducks. Suddenly my friend stopped and stared at a mysterious pair of boots. They weren't any old type of boots they had a pair of legs inside them even though the boots were upside in the weird lake. When we found out we all stared at the turquoise blue trousers and emerald green wellington boots. The water lilies floated along the lake with all the stringy weeds. We were all startled, Eliza the oldest of us all picked up the slimy boot and…

Anh 100 Word Challenge #10

When I walked down the silent lane, I saw something funny. There were some green wellington boots sticking out of a glistening pond. I stopped for another moment and stepped into the water. It wasn’t deep. I lifted up the boots and realised that….There was nothing underneath but a frog. I gasped in wonder. Just after that, the boots grew heavier and felt like something was inside them! “Hello,” smiled a little girl, “my name’s Rose”. I screamed. The girl was covered in head to toe in seaweed and Lilly pads. Later, I found out that Rose was a water-creature!

Tarne 100 Word Challenge #10

I was walking along the uneven road when I came past a filled puddle it wasn't any old puddle in fact it was an enormous lake full of mouldy leaves and grimy water. I thought I saw a person in the water so I pulled and pulled until the boots were free then I realized it was fake boots and fake legs it was a TRICK! Someone had put them there so someone will pick them up. I was disgusted by it so I ran away to go and see my mum. I told her and she was shocked.

Monday 4 November 2013

Jake 100 Word Challenge #10

One grey morning rain slowly trickled down from the sky; it made tiny puddles on the ground. Then it started to rain heavily till the puddles started to look like ponds. 
In the next hour the puddles slowly started to turn into a river, which ran through the street. There were leaves of all different colours and sizes swimming through the water. Planks of rotting wood floated down the river. The rain came to a standstill. The water was still. The water was dead and so was the stinky, mean, wrinkly, old man, floating in the clear, icy cold water.

Amy 100 Word Challenge #10


On one extraordinary day an unfortunate thing happened.
A scientist had found a strange thing sticking up in a river. The strange thing turned out to be some legs sticking up in the river.
It turned out that a hot air balloon had gone bit crazy and someone had fallen into the river head first. Unfortunately the poor little boy had been stuck there so long that he passed away.
The next morning, everyone went up to that river and filled it up with flowers, memories and cards. Everyone was upset but they would always remember the little boy, Liam.

Anna 100 Word Challenge #10

When I was walking along the uneven path I saw this small puddle. I asked my mum if I could jump in it and I did, but it was not shallow, it was deep. I fell upside down and all my mum could see was my grey wellies and not my body. She called the police. They came as soon as they could. When they pulled me out all that they could see were leaves stuck on my body. They rushed me to the hospital and when they called they said, “Can you speak?”
I didn't answer I was dead!!!

Talia 100 Word Challenge #10

One day my mum and me went on a walk to get some lovely fresh air. We saw some deep puddles, if I stepped in to them the water would be up to my knees. We had to be careful were we trod. Suddenly we came across a puddle with blue trousers and emerald green wellies.
“Is it a real person?” I asked my mum, puzzled.
If it was I wonder who it is, my mum got her phone out and called the police because it might have been a murder. The murderer must have buried them to hide it.

Finlay 100 Word Challenge #10

My name is Tom Martin and I am a professional scientist. Earlier this morning on the TV news they explained that a strange man had landed head first in a ginormous river. Everyone was terribly shocked to see the horrendous sight of the upside down man in the picture. 
The next morning the reporters came to knock on my bright red door they explained what had happened and they also muttered that they needed my help to investigate because of course I am a professional scientist. 
The answer was that a man had fallen out of a colourful air balloon.

Lettia 100 Word Challenge #10

I was walking along the road when I saw a huge puddle, but it was not an ordinary puddle, it was a puddle with a pair of feet bobbing along on the top!! The person was wearing jeans and some large, charcoal boots. Around the surface was short grass and tons of mud and dirt. Also there were some leaves and the odd stick. I was so scared that I quickly ran all the way home. 
At home, I told my parents all about what I had seen and how fast it was sinking. In the morning, it was gone.

Joshua 100 Word Challenge #10

When I saw this horrible sight as I was walking past I knew that I had to act fast. I ran up to the puddle and grabbed the boots and started to heave as hard as I could. I was very surprised because the boots were surprisingly light but I kept on pulling. With one final heave the boots came free. Then my happiness quickly turned to anger. IT WAS A TRICK! There was a gang of boys laughing so loud that you could hear it from up the street. I was so mad with them I chased them furiously.

Sunday 3 November 2013

Challenge #10

We have had some rain across the UK so the prompt this week is a picture. It was taken by a very talented photographer so do visit her site Jane Hewitt.

Make sure you look very closely at it. What story does it bring to mind and don’t forget this should be your BEST CREATIVE work!

You will need to send me your work by Friday evening.

Friday 1 November 2013

Anna 100 Word Challenge #9

One day the violent storm came towards the countryside and everyone’s teeth were chattering but they did know that the storm was coming well nearly every one new about the terrible storm the people who worked in the fields had to finish of their work before they could take shelter. All the children stopped playing in the garden and went to shelter in their house from the distance thunder and lightning was coming closer and closer everyone was terrified then before they could sit down the lights went off and no one knew what was happening DUN DUN DUN. !!

Neizan 100 Word Challenge #9

The violent storm was…

The violent storm was extremely ferocious as the soggy wet rain drizzled down from the dark, gloomy, grey and extremely cloudy sky, whilst the wind blow the dark brown and yellow leaves. The leaves also jumped and waved all around the little wet and drowsy town. The children were all bouncing all over the town whilst the mums and dads started to panic because all of their things were blowing all over the place, even though most of their things had already blown away because of the terrible storm, which was causing all of the mess.


Nico 100 Word Challenge #9

The violent storm… horrendously swished the trees side to side whilst people ran screaming like mental pigs! Rain came pouring down all over peoples clothes faster than a cheater which made them soaking wet. Animals ran around crazily faster than ever meanwhile lighting struck over people’s heads while they shivered like they just came out of a fridge! Cars zoomed down the wet cold road and wind blew past all the scared angry people. The street lights flickered slowly as the rain spluttered down. Children sneezed and cried as the storm spread around the poor cold city this was horrendous.

Giuseppe 100 Word Challenge #9


The violent Storm was…

burning people with his violent electric thunder wave and his horrible acid rain. There were 10,000 people running away into a deep dark forest from their abandoned old town and the violent thunder storm.100 trees flying round and around knocking out people and dying and blood all over. People started building a shelter with the fallen trees. The thunder storm got mad and it done 1000,000 volts destroying the whole entire world and the violent thunder storm left and there was no life remaining ever again…….on any planet. God was angry and he eliminated the storm with a lightning bolt.

Wednesday 30 October 2013

Finlay 100 Word Challenge #9

The violent storm was terrifying for me as soon as my mum told me house had blown down I was shocked in sadness. My mum and dad were thinking of moving to Huddersfield and live with my auntie and uncle. Fortunately for us our car survived the terrible storm. If I did move to Huddersfield I would at least see part of my family a lot more than normal. We were thinking about leaving tomorrow. The storm terrifying for me but were at least ready for when it came. The wind whooshed past me as I entered bright red car.

Lettia 100 Word Challenge #9

I woke up this morning to the sound of banging and clattering. I was shocked to find that a storm had hit my home town and more importantly my house!!! Sprinting quickly out of my bed, I grabbed my coat and dashed downstairs, and that’s where I found my mum waiting for me outside. She was watching the rain bucketing down and then sadly she called “Our house is no longer suitable for us to live in, so that’s why we’re going to stay with our uncle and aunt.” Gradually she held her hand out for me and we left.

Anh 100 Word Challenge #9

I woke up one damp morning, expecting to see colourful birds singing peacefully on lush green trees but all I could see was grey logs blocking roads, telegraph lines falling down on the fields which were now flooded in dirty water. The clouds above seemed to be changing, changing into evil shapes while spitting out hail and cold raindrops. Innocent animals were stuck under fallen down trees which must have been there for centuries but the thunder and lightning had got the better of them. Danger was all around on that dreadful day where umbrellas were inside out and people died.

Tilly S 100 Word Challenge #9

The violent storm was knocking down trees and ripping up fences, and my brother was in the house, standing next to our mother, all shaking and teeth chattering. The storm was so strong that it shattered the fragile glass windows on our shed, and when that happened dad locked himself in the bedroom with mum and they started yelling and raging about how much money it would take to get the windows fixed, so it was just me and him, in the dark gloomy kitchen. “At least it is still a bit light.” Just then all the lights switched off.

Leah 100 Word Challenge #9

One lonely day in southern England there was a terrorising storm. The waves were terrifying. The violent storm was cold approaching; people were running away from the dark gloomy sea. The people were petrified you could tell by the look on their faces.
Later on that day an alarming bit of thunder struck and faces went blank with fear, suddenly thunder struck again and everybody ran away from the island apart from one boy Tom Robinson. His best friends were jealous of his bravery but did they have the guts to stand up to the storm? No they did not!

Amy 100 Word Challenge #9

The violent wind storm.
I was awoken at six in the morning by the rain pouring down the window, I dread to think what a day it was going to be. The rain carried on to pour down my window. I thought it was just a bit of rain but it was much worse as I had thought. Suddenly people started to scream and shout and panic. Maybe there was going to be a storm and I was right the wind was pulling trees down, crashing, banging. I was starting to get worried until the sun came yes everyone shouted.

Ruby 100 Word Challenge #9

The violent storm was horrible I didn’t like it I hated it. My brother said it was enormous but I said he was over reacting. My mum said it was huge. But then it got worse and my brother was right. Then I said that it’s gigantic. I then said it was the worst storm I’ve ever seen and so did my brother. But my mum says it is not so bad I have seen worse. I hated it. It was so annoying and scary. I absolutely hated it I was annoyed it was painful for me and my brother.

Sarah B 100 Word Challenge #9

The violent storm was…

I woke up at 8.00 clock in the morning and I was soaking wet with water and my bed was as well but if I had left my window open I would be in terrible danger because I will get very wet but the worst place in my house is my mum and dads room, they had there window open all night long so all of the water that was in their room had moved in to my room and my little brothers room as well. The violent storm was bad in my house very bad. 

Lili 100 Word Challenge #9

It was a lovely day in Skegness, suddenly it started to chuck it down I stopped looking out the window but then it started to thunder I could see flashes of lightening, I quickly ran down stairs and then one of the trees in my garden fell down and nearly hit one of the cars and then a ripping roar of other trees fell down and all I could see was about eleven on the floor and some were in the middle of the road. Mum said on the news they said a violent storm was coming on its way.

Rocco 100 Word Challenge #9

I just woke up in the middle of the night and the wind was banging gates like angry people slamming doors as hard as they could. I was trying to be really careful because the big, horrifying and dangerous thunder bolts had smashed the windows so there were loads and I mean loads of tiny little blades of glass. I went to see if my dogs were ok but one of them had been cut so I got a piece of toilet roll and rapped it up. The blood then stopped luckily. After that I realised I had been cut!

Millie O 100 Word Challenge #9

One early morning I woke up after having a tremendous night it was thundering and lightning like it never had before. It was banging and crashing I was petrified. Later on that day it got perilous and lost control. Suddenly the wind turned in to a massive hurricane. The lightning struck! Everyone was terrified you could tell by the look on their faces. Finally I went to sleep and CRASH the tree had fell down and I nearly got blown away. In the end the violent storm calmed down it was so close that the house didn't blow down, phew!

Paris 100 Word Challenge #9

The Violent storm.
The violent storm was a misty storm, there were cars getting crushed because the trees were blowing over. Nobody could get to sleep in the cottage. Everybody was running away especially the women with their children! The grey clouds were giving me nightmares…
The people who lived next door from me their roof was dinted, then we packed our cases and went to make a shelter. We lived near the shore were all the ships was coming in making a terrible noise. It was only raining gently it was strange because it was a big terrible storm.

Tarne 100 Word Challenge #9

The violent storm was terrible there were trees blowing over onto houses and cars with people in them. Also it was like Dorothy in the Wizard of Oz with the big hurricane but this one had rain pouring down onto the bumpy, soggy road. The rain got heavier and heavier, the sky got darker and darker until it went black! Lights turned on in houses as all the cars, and even lorries got blown away. The storm got more furious as people spoke about it. The lonely town was trashed. The rain turned into a downpour. And everyone was unhappy.