Showing posts with label #28. Show all posts
Showing posts with label #28. Show all posts

Saturday, 18 April 2015

Grace LB - 100WC#28


“It’s a very beautiful view,” Joan told Dave quietly.
“It is, but I would like a different view, we have been standing here for as long as I remember,” Dave replied to Joan.
“Woof!” barked their dog Jack.
“I'm afraid we can't, we were made here and we were meant to be here in the first place, so you’re going to have to get use to this view,” Joan explained.
“I guess you’re right,” sighed Dave, “now let’s change the subject.”
“OK,” agreed Joan.
“Woof!” barked Jack the dog again.

The three figures stood there, staring at the rippled sea.    

Kieran - 100WC#28

Timothy = right Jo = left

"Ah, what are we going to do today huh," asked Jo.
"Not really sure, we could watch the boats," replied Timothy.
"Don't we do that every day!" shouted Jo as loudly as she possibly could. Suddenly a huge cruise liner passed by and almost blew Jo off the railing and into the sea consequently the dog called Sam hid behind Tim. 
"Wow we don't see that very often, maybe we should watch the boats come and pass us. Look it’s a fleet of ships." asked Tim.
"Okay but not for long, okay," replied Jo.
So they kept watching.

Sam B - 100WC#28

"It's a good day here in Cardiff Bay, Jim," sighed Bob, taking a breath in the fresh air.
"Sure is," replied Jim. "If you had one wish what would it be?"
"I wish I could move," explained Bob.
"Me too," said Jim, "what else."
"Being the most famous person in the world," answered Bob.
"I would be in charge of everything," replied Jim.
"I get you," said Bob quietly. They looked out into the open sea.
"It's weird that if you kept on sailing from here you would get to America," said Jim.

"Yes, that is quite true," replied Jim.

Caitlin - 100WC#28

The look on the man’s face says it all as he looks relieved to be finally where he is. “Look at the view” his wife gasped.
“That was such a journey,” he replied, still in thought about the long voyage they had just sailed. They had dreamed of this better life for so long. The dog didn’t take his eyes of his owner he had sat beside him and had also done this long journey. They would now live a good life. “This is the life of freedom,” cried the wife. The dog barked and the people laughed.

Aron - 100WC#28

Last summer me and my family went to Cardiff, the capital city of Wales. On Cardiff Bay, I saw statues of two people accompanied by a dog. The woman was sitting on handrail and pointing at the water. The man was looking at the woman with slight stare. In my head I was imagining what they were saying. I thought that maybe the woman was saying to the man; "Oh dear me! I can't believe we missed that ferry...” 
The man calmly answered, “If you had put trainers on as I asked, we would probably have caught it." I smiled as I thought it was funny.

Rio - 100WC#28

These statues of two people and a dog are in Cardiff, Wales. I think they are made out of aluminium or brass. I think they are in the harbour and maybe the man is asking the lady if she wants to have a walk on the boat with him because I think they are setting off on a cruise. I think they are from the old times from what it looks like from the picture. The lady might be saying, “Oh Edward look over there I think it’s the Titanic.” They might be coming back to land to come home.

Harvey - 100WC#28

One summer’s morning Bill, Kate and Fred the dog decided on a day trip to look around and explore Cardiff Bay in Wales. When they got there they wanted to go on a boat trip. They had to wait an hour before the next boat to get there. Then Kate spotted a cafe across the bay “let’s go over there while we wait” she said pointing to the cafe.
“Good idea” said Bill
So they all went and had something to eat and drink before they set off. The boat arrived and they climbed aboard for an exciting sightseeing trip.

Charlie - 100WC#28

"Look over there," as she pointed her finger, said the strange looking lady who was holding a shoe.
The man with the newspaper turned and looked as the enormous ship sailed across the harbour. "IT'S A CRUISE SHIP!!!" he shouted in a loud voice sounding enthusiastic.
The cruise ship glided through the water whilst making a loud noise which made the dog bark, "WOOF, WOOF!!!"

The ship stopped sailing at Cardiff Bay, letting the passengers off the ship which enabled them to look at the fishing boats which collected the fish needed for Cardiff's well known dish: Fish and Chips.

Jemima - 100WC#28

The two people/ statues both look very serious. I think that this may be a parent and child conversation. I think that the adult is handing down an important legacy to his family member. Because of this it seems like it was a very important moment in their family history. The bay is a great place to have the statue because in the background there is a big wheel and many more fascinating buildings to observe. Maybe this statue was made long ago. It’s in dark colours so that makes me think that it may have been made long ago.

Madison - 100WC#28

"Hello are you walking your dog!" said Miranda 
"Yes I am. I thought we might see the view like the sea and the big wheel!" said Steven.
"Well it is a very very nice day isn't it, you're dog is very cute what is its name?" 
“Her name is Lacy"
"She is well behaved. Here is my number, maybe we could be friends?" 
Then they both walk away and the day after that he got her a dog of her own and went for ice cream and soon they became very good friends and always hang out nearly every single day.
 The End.

100WC#28 Morgan

This picture looks like two male friends speaking to each other and just hanging out. I think they might be saying to each other "What a lovely view," or "How are you today?" 
And this is my story!

"How are you today?" asked the man
"Fine thanks," replied the man's friend "Shall we take my dog, Buster for a walk?"
"Yes." So the man and his friend went for a walk taking Buster for a walk. After a while the man went home and said "goodbye!" and "see you soon" 
"Come on Buster, lets go home," he said.

Saturday, 5 April 2014

Romola - But I thought I had enough time

Dear Diary,
Guess what happened today? Lucy and I went dress shopping for a prom dress. Lucy spotted a dress she liked so she went to try it on. I told her we needed to start to walk back to school but she insisted that she try it on. Finally she finished and it was almost 1:15 so we raced back to school. By the time we got to school it was 1:30. We were late for class and I got an F. Her excuse was but I thought I had enough time, seriously. I was so mad at her.

But, I thought I had enough time by Lettia

Today I forgot about homework
And “Oh no!!” I cried,
I had to do something about it
So there I sat and sighed.

“What could I do?” I thought
But then I had an idea,
Just simply send a little note
Saying
From Lettia

The content would read
“Well… But, I thought I had enough time,
See, not bringing in your homework
Really isn't a crime.”


The next day miss came to me saying
“Your note was great, I loved the way it rhymed,
So I’m proud to say, not bringing in your homework
Is officially, unofficially crimed!”


But I thought I had enough time by Lewis

But I thought I had enough time to go to the park before my friends party started! But when I got to the park I suddenly realised that my watch was an hour slow so the party had started one hour ago! I ran home got dressed into my smart clothes and biked all the way to Kids World. When I got there they had eaten and everyone was leaving to go home. I felt really sorry for my friend because I was invited to his party and I said I was going but I was two hours late.

I should have remembered the clocks had changed!!

...but I thought I had enough time.. by Amy

I woke up feeling lazy as a pig until I realised it was 8am but then I thought again well I still have half an hour to get dressed, have breakfast and get to school. Actually I could go to sleep for five minutes! 
Five minutes later, now it’s 8:05. I strolled to the mirror so I could make my hair perfect. After 15 minutes I was hungry so I went to get my breakfast, which my mum had made already. It was delicious. Then I got ready and washed my face. Then I looked at the clock, “Oh my goodness I'm late for school...but I thought I had enough time…!

But I thought I had enough time by Talia


But I thought I had enough time to get ready for school because it starts at 35 minutes past nine. No it doesn’t just because the clocks have gone forward 1 hour it doesn't mean school does. I didn't know that. Well you do now anyway hurry up you are going to be late for school. Fine ,quick you have only got five minutes. 
later……
Right lets go. I do wish that if the clocks go forward one hour school opens one hour later but still finishes at quarter past three. 
When they got older they became prime minister and change the school time 1 hour earlier.

But I thought I had enough time by Olivia

I woke up on a Sunday morning. I suddenly remembered it was my sisters birthday and the party started at 1:15. Two hours to play words with friends. 
Suddenly the phone rang, it was mum. "What are you doing?"
"Playing words with friends," I replied.
"You're late!" she moaned.
"But I thought I had enough time for a game."
"Did you alter your clock forward an hour?" said mum.
Oh no I hadn't! I threw on my clothes and was in the car in three minutes flat. I was very embarrassed when I walked into the party and everyone cheered.

Thursday, 3 April 2014

…but I thought I had enough time…by Millie C

Last week I was told by my mum that I had to get my homework in by Friday but I thought it was Monday she told me but actually it was Tuesday she told me. Anyway I brought it in on Saturday thinking it was Friday and my mum told me it was late. “But I thought I had enough time!” I cried. But my mum said, "No, it’s Saturday today and you haven't brought it in on time so you will have to be grounded for a week, no a month, yes a month now stay in the house....."

But I thought I had enough time by Anh

"No!" I screamed. Milo the Magnificent had locked me up for being a girl. You see, Milo is now the Prime-Minister and he despises ever girl on the planet.
My captive ached with laughter as he marched away. I could see the keys, hung around a German Shepard. My world had been turned upside down and tears streamed from my eyes. Nothing could save me now. But I thought I had enough time and maybe I did. I was determined to escape so I thought for a minute. After a while, I had an idea. I could use her skills with animals and get the key!

…but I thought I had enough time…by Leah

I was baking cakes one Sunday night for my best friend Ella’s birthday which was on Monday. It was seven o'clock at night and I had finally chosen the mini chocolate chip cupcakes that will have icing and a handle with tiny marshmallows on top of the beautiful, luscious chocolaty chocolate. But I thought I had enough time to finish the cakes when the clock struck eight! 

“Leah, its time to go to bed!”

“But mum I haven’t finished Ella’s cakes yet…"

So I frosted them as quick as a flash it was currently nine o'clock and I was done!