Showing posts with label #18. Show all posts
Showing posts with label #18. Show all posts
Saturday, 24 January 2015
…what was that I could feel?… Kieran
What was that I could feel on the top of my back, the slithery finger, no not fingers: it feels like some kind of tentacle on my back. I didn't even think about moving not even a muscle in case it attacks. I feel something like: suckers; or a hover or maybe even a fan. Now it’s over me I quickly hide under my covers so as not to get eaten. I'm petrified now! Suddenly my dad , shouts “get out of here the police are here." Suddenly the monster jumped out of my window. What a very very weird day.
,,, what was that I could feel? … by Caitlin
“Mum do I have to stop?” I had to stop in my Uncle Terry’s house which was empty as he died a while ago. Rumour has it that the place is haunted and my uncle Terry is still there but in ghost form. It was infested with rats and has a thick layer of dust on the furniture. I went to go and brush my teeth but the pipes were clogged up with spiders. Creak went the floorboards the room was getting smaller and smaller, I buried myself under the bed covers and turned out the light what was that I could feel? …
…what was that I could feel... by Aron
Heavy, filthy air filled the gloomy house as the floorboards creaked faintly, and the windows shattered every time I took a step forward. As my heart pounded I asked, "What was that I could feel?"
"Probably nothing." said Kieran.
"Let's go further, we need to find that key!" I whispered. Then as we were walking up the shadowy stairs, there was slight creak on each step. The closer to the top we got the more scared I got. I could feel my heart pounding. It rose up to my throat and back down. When we got to the top I saw...
"Probably nothing." said Kieran.
"Let's go further, we need to find that key!" I whispered. Then as we were walking up the shadowy stairs, there was slight creak on each step. The closer to the top we got the more scared I got. I could feel my heart pounding. It rose up to my throat and back down. When we got to the top I saw...
What was that I could feel? by Chloe
1st January 1923
The green, slimy monster returns at the New Year, it always did that. Everybody would lock up and hide under their warm bed covers, well at least I did. Wait, I didn’t introduce myself properly. Hi, I’m Amelia-Grace , the head girl of Cannery Academy and this is part of my miserable life…This year I decided to stay up and catch this monster! I know the monster isn’t real, how can it be. I do not believe in it, but I stayed up anyway. I felt something on my shoulder, but what was that I could feel?
…what was that I could feel?…by Rio
It was the annual cubs camping event and this year we were going to a spooky forest called Dear Death. When we got there we set the tents up and the fire. Later we went exploring to find something the older scouts had hidden for us to find. It was getting dark and foggier by the minute which made everyone petrified and jumpy. Something strange was happening in front of me but I couldn't see it because of the fog. I was putting my hands in front of me to see what was there. What was that I could feel?
…what was that I could feel?… by Harvey
I was having a go on the guess what’s in the box stall at
the village fair, if I guessed right I won a bar of chocolate. I felt my nerves
as I pulled my sleeve and pushed my hand and arm in the box. What was that I
could feel? It was cold and slimy, it made me shudder it had lots of lumps in
it. “YUK!” I said I didn't like the feel of it on my hands Then I thought about
what it could be, “BEANS ITS BAKED BEANS!” I shouted “The chocolate’s yours
said the lady.”
…what was that I could feel?… by Charlie,
We went to Harrogate for Christmas, once we got there we saw our cousins which were called Sam and Drew. At night time, we hung up our stockings around the fire and we left Santa a mince pie and just a carrot for the Reindeers including RUDOLPH!!! Before we went to bed we opened the front door to see if we could see Santa but as I opened the door what was that I could feel on my head? It was cold and wet and IT WAS SNOWING!!! HOORAY, we all shouted and cheered and then we went to have a snowball fight in our pyjamas.
...What was that I could feel? by Grace LB
Mary was just accepted into a gang. The Blazes. Now she was in the group, every meeting they would play truth or dare. They went round in a circle, and the others had to decide if it was going to be truth or dare. To Mary the meeting seemed to last hours and when it was finally her turn she trembled like a volcano about to explode. “Your dare is... put your hand into the bin!” they shouted. Mary wanted the ground to swallow her. She walked over to the bin and put her hand in it. She shrieked and pulled it back out. “What was that I could feel?” she screamed. She looked at her hand. “Eeewww!” she shouted.
…what was that I could feel?…, by Sophia
Usually I read a book in bed so I reached out to my bedside table to find myself wondering what was that I could feel? I saw an eye catching, thick and colourful book, it was covered with glitter and I could not wait to read it. As I began to read I got transported into another land as the lifelike description kept me hooked to read on. As I turned the page I could not wait to find out what happened next! I did not want to go to sleep. As I reached the final page of the outstanding book I realised it was morning!
…what was that I could feel?… by Jemima
It was 2 days until my birthday. My friends, Kieran and Aron said that they were going to get me something special this year. They kept saying to me, “You will love what we've gotten you for your birthday!" I spent the days thinking about what it might be. I thought and thought but I couldn't guess. When the day arrived I was blindfolded so they both led me somewhere, they told me to put my hand on something In front of me. What was that I could feel? When they removed the blindfold I saw a jet for me.
…what was that I could feel?…, Eleanor
As I was walking through the gloomy forest at the end of the day with my best friend we came across an abandoned house. We entered the house into a dark room that smelt old and dusty. The floorboards creaked under our feet as we entered the room. "What was that I could feel?" I said to my friend as a shiver went down my spine. I looked back at my friend but realised that she wasn't there. I called out her name and the room echoed with the sound of my voice. I searched the house for her but she was never seen again!
…what was that I could feel?… by Morgan
It was a cold, dark and windy night I could not get to sleep I kept asking myself what was that I could feel? It felt slimy but cold then I turned round and there it was a big slimy green monster tapping me on the shoulder so I ran and ran downstairs and locked all the doors but it came again! "What should I do?" I asked myself so I went upstairs climbed back into bed then suddenly I woke up and it was all just a dream. So I went downstairs and made myself some breakfast. That was creepy!
…what was that I could feel?…, by Mia
One sunny day I woke up and. I remembered that today I had to do a test. The test was about feel because a few weeks ago I went to a feeling contest and luckily I got in into the final, which I was very surprised about. On the way I was very nervous and scared if I got any wrong on the sheets. When we got there I sat down and waited for my worksheets. After half an hour I was on I question I thought to myself what was that I could feel?. And then I knew what the answer was.
What was that I could feel? by Mollie
What was that I could feel? It felt weird and it was like I was drawn here. A little brown pesky rat tapped me on my cold numb shoulder and made me stumble across an ancient powdery white skull and tanned orange funny bones. I could hear chanting like; come closer come closer and then it stopped. All was black, the earth shook. And that my friend was the very first earthquake in Japan and I was there alone. Still dying. Still living. But how? Well that is a whole new story for a whole new day, see you soon.
…what was that I could feel?… by Lily
One day I went to school and it was PARTY DAY, we did a lot of fun stuff and when I went home I carried on PARTYING!!!!!! We had a lot of challenges but when it came to me I had to feel stuff. I stuck my hand in to a bag and felt around
‘What was that I could feel?’ I thought. Suddenly something bit me so I went to hospital but it was only a mosquito. So we went back to the game. Then I shouted, “Is it a piece of wool!” and I rightfully won the prize.
‘What was that I could feel?’ I thought. Suddenly something bit me so I went to hospital but it was only a mosquito. So we went back to the game. Then I shouted, “Is it a piece of wool!” and I rightfully won the prize.
…what was that I could feel?… by Sam B
Me and my friend were playing the feel and touch game. It is where you put your hand in a box then try and find the item shown on the card. It was my friend's turn first so I picked up a random card. My friend scuffled his hand through the box and he randomly picked up a dice. I peeked at the card and it showed a dice. It was my turn, my friend showed me a red ball and I put my hand in the box. What was that I could feel, was it the ball?It was!
Saturday, 25 January 2014
Romola 100WC#18
As I walked past the beautiful house, that had been abandoned for two years, I noticed that there was a pair of new pink pumps, that still had the tag on and had never been worn. Of course being myself I was curious. So after school instead of staying back for homework club I went straight to the house. I got to the door, luckily the door was unlocked, so I creaked the door open. As I opened the door I heard someone say hello, I looked up, down and around but no one was there it was a mystery...
Sarah 100WC#18
This picture looks like a shed that's been in the rain and in the reflection you can see the doors are opened. In the shed you can see pink shoes, and as well you can see cobwebs in the shed . No one has been in there in a long time. So that's why the shed has cobwebs in it. There looks like there is a ladder in the reflection ,and there is red and brown paint on the shed. As well there are windows in the back ground of the reflection and the shed looks new to me.
Lettia 100WC#18
I think these windows are smashed in and that they might be broke. Inside the shed that they are on looks dirty, smelly and damp. This shed is probably used for power tools. If there were power tools inside, they would probably be dirty and even rotten. The dirt on the windows looks like dust. The paint on the shed is scratching away. Altogether the shed looks like it is in serious condition and needs replacing. This shed looks as if it has some paranormal activity. The shed looks very old and really dirty.
Lili 100WC#18
When I walked into the garden I saw a shed, I strolled near it when I viewed in the window I saw a pair of pink shoes and a shovel the rest was cobwebs. Then something fell over inside so I darted across into the house…
The next day I unhurriedly staggered near the shed, then I saw a silvery key and twisted it, I surprisingly saw a ferret but none of the people who lived here ever told us there was a little lake in the garden.
So I secretly kept the ferret!
The next day I unhurriedly staggered near the shed, then I saw a silvery key and twisted it, I surprisingly saw a ferret but none of the people who lived here ever told us there was a little lake in the garden.
So I secretly kept the ferret!
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