Showing posts with label but all we could see was water. Show all posts
Showing posts with label but all we could see was water. Show all posts

Sunday, 9 February 2014

Neizan #20


I was at home with my friend and we decided to go the Embassy Swimming pool, but all we could see was water the whole building was absolutely full of water. Everybody in the building was floating around in the ocean sea water, Suddenly Leah, Millie C and I were floating around with all the other children, adults and grandparents, soon after it looked like we had seen some of our other friends. Leah, Millie and I swam towards them. 

The End!!! 

Saturday, 8 February 2014

Romola #20

At about 5am, I heard a large shriek. I imagined it was my sister, so I ignored it and put my pillow over my head. 
“Taylor ! Get up come! Quick!”
“Be quiet Willow, go to sleep!” By that moment I felt that something actually was wrong, but I didn't believe myself and tried to go back to sleep. Just as I settled down my sister started again.
“Taylor come now before it goes it’s beautiful!”
I’d had enough, I pottered down the stairs to Willow, and looked at what she was looking at, but all I could see was water dripping down the windows.

Sarah #20

I jumped out of bed to see a puddle of water under my smelly feet but why was it there. I slowly tip toed down the stairs past my mum and dads room and brothers to see where the water was coming from. So I found out it lead to the basement. There was no light down there and I could hear drip, drip, drip near me but I could not see only hear then my brother came down, but all we could see was water and we did not know how to stop it, then my mum came down to repair it and that was about it.

Giuseppe #20

I was at home peacefully playing Minecraft on my computer with my friends. My friend Nico said, Hey everyone let's make a dimension of water!"
"Good idea," said Finli.
"Hold on guys, " I said. "I went on YouTube the other day and typed in, 'Water Dimension' and it said a person was sucked into the game and into the water dimension!"
"No. make it now!" screamed Nico.
"OK," I said.
A few minutes later we made it and boom, we were sucked into the game ... but all we could see was water...

Finli #20

Travelling across the sea in a rusty ship reeling in fish like a lion hunting its prey was a young fellow named Finli. Finli's job was to keep track of high waves and suddenly one was close!
We were going to abandon the ship when in a matter of time we were too late. A huge tsunami over lapped the ship and the ship began to sink like the Titanic. All I could see was soft runny water and nowhere to go. I knew it was the end for me but no, not today! A small gleam of light shone on my nose and I knew where to go! I swam to the top but all I could see was water everywhere...

Lewis #20

…But all we could see was water, it was filling my house up slowly but steadily, it destroyed everything! Nobody could stop it! It was destroying all the houses down my road and it was turning into a flood! Some people drowned but most people lived to tell the tale! It all happened so so fast! I wish I never experienced it. "Would it cost a lot Mum" I asked
She replied, "Yes it would, but some things we just can’t get back like the pictures and other valuable!" Today was the worst day of my life and I wish it never happened in my life time!

Jake #20

Ten years ago I was only about a mile away from my brother’s house to have a summer holiday, we were going to Madagascar. When I got there my brother got into the car and we went zooming down the road. When we got there we drove onto the boat and we were sailing off to Madagascar!
After many hours I saw an enormous rock heading towards us at high speed. Then!!!BANG!!! The ship started sinking! My brother and I had to jump off the ship. Then a large, ferocious wave knocked us both out. We woke up but all we could see was water…

Nico #20

I and my best friend Finli were going on an adventure in the woods for a day; we travelled to the doomy forest to have an amazing adventure. Finally we got there we both went up to the woods slowly Finli stood on a twig then a loud crack sound popped out “Ssshhhh!” I whispered as he stared at me, “Look there’s a fox!” I yelled. Me and my friend slowly walked to the soft red fox its tail was swishy like a snake, his eyes were bright green we walked closer and a man in dark black came out but all we could see was water.

Anh #20


"...And we never saw him AGAIN." Everyone gasped. Jonathan was telling a Scottish legend to the other children. It was a scary one. "People say the monster still lives in the river now. " Dan was so fascinated he asked Jonathon which river it was and was soon on a mystical journey.

When he arrived at the river, he ran to the side, expecting something amazing but all he could see was water. He sighed deeply, thinking he'd been tricked so he walked back to his home. But as soon as he sulked away a giant head arose out of the river. It was the Loch Ness Monster...

Thursday, 6 February 2014

Talia #20

One night I was laying on my squishy sofa watching TV. But there was something weird going on because I could here something unusual. At first I thought it was the TV but it wasn't I looked around the house to see what was making the noise but I could hear nothing. Then I went to look out side. There was still nothing making the sound but all I could see was water rapidly swaying side coming right in my direction. How is this possible I thought to myself. Seconds later the water swept me of my feet! Will I drowned? Will I get washed up somewhere?

Wednesday, 5 February 2014

Joshua #20

One day me and my family decided to go to the beach for a nice family day out. So we all got ready to set of. We got money, to buy some food and a bucket and spade. We all set off to the beach. We got to the life boat station but all we could see was water, in fact we couldn't even see the sand. We were all disappointed and started the long journey home. When we arrived home we all thought about what to do for the rest of the day. We decided to play a nice game of tumbling monkeys. It was great fun.

Amy #20

It was the middle of the night and all I could hear was the terrible, miserable rain pouring and pouring. After hours and hours of rain I started to think that it might flood. I’d never heard such rain in my whole life. I knew that I wouldn't be able to sleep so I watched the rain pour down my window while the tiredness waited for my eyes to fall. Why wouldn't the rain stop, well nobody knows. It was finally morning, I went outside ..but all I could see was water.. dun dun dun! What were we going to do but no one knows...

Leah #20

With my loving happy family I went to the deep, in Hull, we had an exiting time. We saw carp; goldfish; salmon;  the catfish; sting ray; sharks and dolphins. But this one tank had no fish in it, it was strange. All in separate tanks, but all we could see was water in one tank no fish, no coral, no nothing! Apart from water, I was the first one to see the lifeless tank, it was eerie and very strange indeed……
“Hey mum, look at this it’s a tank with no fish, come quick!” I screamed at my mum!

“I’m coming, what is the big fuss?”

Summer #20

Dear diary,
Today mum and dad took me to an aquarium to see all the fish. They were some beautiful fish, some tropical and some dull but they all looked amazing. And then after we went for lunch in the aquarium café I had a bacon sandwich and a shmoo it was scrumptious. After that we went back in to the fish area and we lined up for the underwater lift when it was finally our turn I jumped into the lift as quick as lightning because I was so excited and when the lift started moving I was screaming …..but all we could see was water….....

Finlay #20

Super Fish, the fastest and greatest fish in the whole ocean! Every summer all of the fish gather
together in a stadium for the ultimate one hundred metre swim. This year Super Fish was defending his title for the second time. They were all at the starting point waiting for the buzzer. On your marks get set go! They were off speeding as fast as they could but Super Fish was right ahead he was like a flash of lightning. Suddenly he lost control knocking him unconscious. He had disappeared but all we could see was water
Where was he?

Millie C #20

Once my Nana took us to this camp and it was really boring! All we did was play really horrible kiddie games like pass the parcel but like my Nan, she didn't even wrap the parcel and the parcel wasn't even something good, it was one of those creepy Barbie dolls.
The next morning my Nan suggested we could go down to the field and I didn't want to hurt her so we did but all we could see was water going on for miles and miles which never stopped going! My Nan suggested we should go back, I agreed.

Lili #20

When me and my family went to a jungle in Australia we went because we love to explore, when we got there we started to walk and obviously explore then we came to a stream and it never stopped all we could see was water it looked fairly deep we just stood there and watched. Then is raised my voice and said, “Hello!” and it echoed it made the water shake so I just said to my Mum, Dad and Sister let’s just get out of here so we walked all the way back to the helicopter.

Lettia #20

“Mum, do we have to go out on the boat?”
“Yes, I told you that you needed some fresh air,” my mum moaned to me. I groaned and carried on walking down to the beach. “Hop on then,” mum raised her voice. Thud was the sound, as I jumped onto the boat. She took the hook off, that was the only thing keeping us from floating away. The boat rocked from side to side, and in the distance all we could see was water. 
After about an hour or two, we finally landed back on dry land.