100WC#31 Adapting Fairytales

The challenge this week was due to adapt a fairytale to celebrate the birth of the new royal baby.

Snowflake and the 7 trolls by Jessica 

Once upon a time there lived a princess called Snowflake and she lived with 7 Trolls in the side of mountain. While Snowflake was living with the 7 Trolls her mother (The Queen) was on a hunt to kill her. It was very hard for Snowflake to keep running away from her horrible mother. The worst thing about Snowflake’s mother was that her mother was a witch so it was ten times harder to stay alive and survive. Every time Snowflake wanted to get away from the mountain the Trolls had to stay by her side.

Rapunzel by Sam B

Rapunzel was taking a stroll in the woods like she always did on a normal Sunday. She went past a tree and found a tall tower that stood in a massive steep crater. 

"Help! Help! I am stuck," shouted a voice from below. Rapunzel quickly sped towards a steep edge. 

"Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair," begged a knight at the bottom of the stone castle.

"How do you know my name?" asked Rapunzel. The knight did not say a thing. Rapunzel let down her hair and the lost knight climbed up her long hair up to the top.

Cinderella by Mollie 

Once upon a time when I was just a little child, a new royal family member arrived. Her name was Ella. When Ella was just four years old her mother died. After that an evil woman married her father. She had two daughters. They had taken Ella's room and so she had to sleep by the fire in the attic. The evil step mother used Ella as a slave. The two step sisters made fun of the ashes in her hair and called her Cinderella. Later on the family went out for a slow walk. The step-family got lost in the forest and were never seen again and Cinderella lived happily ever after.

Rapunzel by Morgan

Once lived a young girl named Rapunzel she was born with long brown hair a woman named Mother Gothal adopted the child but all she really wanted was her hair because Rapunzel's hair was magical. It healed the hurt and made Mother Gothal look and act younger. Rapunzel found out what was going on so she ran away and chopped all her hair off and turned blonde. A man named Flynn Rider came along and loved Rapunzel the moment he saw her and she loved him they both fell in love and got married Rapunzel's mother never knew what happened!

Hansel and Gretel Sam F

Once upon a time there was a small cottage. Inside there was a Mum, Dad and two little boys. One day we realised that we did not have enough food for our family. So the father brought his two boys into the forest and left them behind. When it started to get dark the boys had nowhere to go. Suddenly they saw a massive gingerbread house. So they ran as fast as they could to the door so they could go inside. As they knocked on the door a kind lady said, "You can stay here as long as you want."

The end.

Beauty and the Beast by Eleanor

Once upon a time there lived a very beautiful princess in a shining castle. The princess was so naughty she slurped her drinks; she even jumped on the table at dinner and she broke wind. 

One night an old man came to the castle. He wanted warmth from the rain and horrible weather. The princess took one look at the man and walked away slamming the castle door behind her. In one second the old man changed himself into a handsome prince. After that the prince transformed her into a hideous beast and put a powerful spell on the entire castle.

Sleeping Beauty by Madison

One day a baby princess was born and every one came to see her and nearly everyone was invited. Then there were some fairies called Sparkle, Glitter and Shine they all gave the baby Victoria a very nice present. Then an evil human sized fairy named Dark Widow swooped in and said, "Oh why was I not invited!" and she got angry and cursed baby Victoria so that when she was 18 she would fall on a bush of thorns and go to sleep for millions of years and only true love’s kiss could save her....................

Cinderella / Royalella by Jemima 

Long ago, there lived a young girl named Royella. Her mum had died years ago, that meant she'd never get a sister. So instead she decided to try and have a baby. Soon, she became pregnant. Everything was going according to plan when all of a sudden her father got married to Claireaphene, a very evil lady. Royalella's father wasn't aware that she was evil, but Royalella was. Royalella's new stepmother told her she wasn't allowed to have a baby. A while after, Royalella met the man of her dreams. They moved to Candy-land together. Royalella soon had her baby, it was named Charlotte.

Red Riding Hood by Rose 

My favourite fairy tale story is Little Red Riding Hood because it is fun to read. 

Once upon a time Little Red Riding Hood, Millie, went to bring her brother some ham and mustard because he had run out of food. As she was outside of his bedroom she saw a rat who jumped onto her shoulder. The rat was named Cow, he was Millie's brothers pet. When Millie skipped into her brother’s room she put down the food on his bedside table and popped Cow back into his cage. But she hadn't shut the bars properly, so Cow hopped out of the cage and into the wardrobe where he made a den. He did a little poo in Millie's brother’s best clothes. Millie had to sell Cow because he did a poo everywhere.

Red Riding Hood by Grace LB

There was a little girl called Red Riding Hood and she was on her way to see her granny, she walked there every week and her mother always warned her about the big bad bunny, he would steal your goodies and Red was giving granny cupcakes, but she didn't believe her. On her way she thought to herself, “How could a bunny be so scary.” She suddenly heard something behind her and then she only had one cupcake. Then she ran to her granny's house and gave her the cupcake, but all the bunny wanted was her carrot cupcakes.  

Goldilocks and the Three Bears by Charlie

There was once three royal family members. Prince William was big bear, Princes Kate was Mummy bear and Prince George was baby bear. One day they walked to the Castle in Kensington Forest where they were served with three bowls of Rice Krispies, they poured over the cold milk and listened as they went’ "SNAP", "CRACKLE" and an "ENORMOUS POP", when out jumped a little princess called Charlotte Elizabeth. The princess soon became part of the Royal family and couldn't wait to see her granny, the "Queen". Princess Charlotte was welcomed by the Queen into the arms of the Royal Family.

Goldilocks and the Three Monkeys by Harvey

Once upon time in the rain forest a girl called Goldilocks saw a treetop house so she climbed up and saw three wooden plates with bananas on them. Daddy’s banana was too ripe, Mummy’s wasn’t ripe enough and baby’s was just right. There were chairs made out of branches, Daddy’s was too rough, Mummy’s too thin and baby’s was just right. Then she saw three hammocks’, Daddy’s was too itchy Mummy’s was too scratchy and Baby’s was just right. The monkeys arrived back to find her sleeping and swung her out of the hammock she awoke and Goldilocks ran away.

Cinderella by Chloe

One day there lived two ugly sisters, a step mother and Ella Cinders. They were rich and loved their life except from Ella. She hated life and always moaned about it, well she didn’t exactly moan, she wrote about it in her wish diary. It had sixteen wishes ready for her birthday (tomorrow). She was excited and was ready to roll, but unfortunately for her she couldn’t have a party because her step mother and two sisters wouldn’t let her. She got angry about this and she stole money off her sisters to buy the beautiful dress. 

“ELLA, WHERE’S MY MONEY!!!”…

Gingerbread man by Aron

Once upon a time, lived an old man called Pat. He was lonely because his only daughter moved far away. Pat loved to bake. One day, he used a magical powder he got from his daughter. She said to use it when he feels lonely. He decided to make a big gingerbread man. After putting him in the oven it started to shatter! A massive blasting beam of blinding light came out from the old oven... The gingerbread man was alive! Pat didn't have to be alone anymore, he had a great companion and he called him Gingi.

And they lived happily ever after...

Cinderella by Caitlin 

There was a girl called Cinderella who was invited to a ball with her two ugly step sisters. When they arrived the prince was there. Cinderella danced with the prince until the clock struck 12, Cinderella ran out of the palace, leaving her shoe behind. The next morning the prince went to see whose foot it should fit. One of the ugly sisters heard of this and had an old witch cast a spell on her that any shoe she tried would fit. The shoe fit and on the day she married the prince he turned into a penniless pauper.

100WC#31 by Anh

"At last, the magnificent beast has been slaughtered. The Mini Men have finally defeated it, after countless years of sheer terror. At last, the citizens can walk out of their houses without looking around for danger!" A news reporter exclaimed, "What we call a Striped Buzzer has been found dead round the borders of Little-Foot Village and an ant walker found it while walking round the Weed Trees." Just then, a faint buzzing sound was heard and the ground shook. The buzzing grew louder every second and the Striped Buzzer's legs began to move. "What's happening!?" The news reporter shouted.

100WC#31 by Amy

You'll never guess what, I just had the most weirdest dream ever. Well I found this pink sparkly wand lying on the floor so of course I picked it up and tried to do some magic tricks. With a gigantic bang I was as small as an ant. I was so terrified. What was going on? It was so horrible I had to hide incase anyone saw me. Carefully and quietly I climbed up a tree and hid behind a leaf! Hopefully no one had seen me but then this annoying bee kept annoying me. So I got a stick and whacked him until he would stop annoying me. Then he spoke! Wasn't that weird?

100WC#31 by Lewis

"What is this creature?" asked Tim the miniature man.

"I don't know," said Bob the miniature man.

Tim and Bob stated to poke this odd creature with a stick! They realised that if you touch the fur of the creature it would sting you, they found this out the hard way! They saw it had somthing attached to its body, they were wings! Soon Tim started to put up some cameras because they wanted to always watch this creature just incase it moved. They watched it for hours and hours until they realised it was dead, they named it the bee.

100WC#31 by Jake

The murder scene

The night before the party, a dead, cold body was found on the floor, no one knows who it is. We have sent forensic investigators to the scene to see who might have killed him. They have found the dead body in the hallway of the hive; they have sent us information that the dead body is the famous Mr Bee. There were three suspects at the scene; Wasp, Fly and Mosquito. We have found stinger resin from Wasp, faeces from Fly and blood from Mosquito. Stinger resin was found in Mr Bee's wound meaning Wasp …

100WC#31 by Talia

The tiny model men are carefully examining the poor dead bee. With their kit all stuffed in a well made box and ready to take pictures they are very well equipped. One of the men is holding one of the bee's legs trying to figure out what it feels like or he might be taking a hair of it to find out what type of bee it is. Meanwhile, the other man is taking photos of the bee to take back to his lab and look at it closer so he can see every single hair on its body.

100WC#31 by Finli

"Oh isn't it a lovely day for a picnic?"
"Oh yes I agree!"
Cautiously a bee came swan diving to the ground like a defeated spitfire!
"Buzzzzz, Hel-Help me."
"No, your blocking the natural imaginative view!"
"Please I'll get out the way."
"Well Bob what do you think?"
"...Well lets give it a whirl."
"Test 1 (Bob said). what shall we use?"
"I know! a..."
"Let me guess, a spoon?"
"Yes how did you know?"
"Because you're upset with them."
"Oh yeah." Bob said confidently.
So Bob and Harry meandered over to the cupboard and of cause someone almost fell off...

100WC#31 by Joshua

When I look at this picture I see a worker bee right next to a set of dolls. It might be that the bee wanted to take part in a play. I got this idea from the doll on the left hand side. He is carrying what looks like a light, like you would see on a film set when the film would be in the making. Or it could be an investigation site because the two men are wearing strange suits and the man on the left also has a camera. Some people might find this picture quite funny!

100WC#31 by Tilly

In England lots of different species of bees have been dropping rapidly. Bee numbers all over the country are dropping, and all because of human kind!

Newspapers, magazines, we get a first glimpse of the front cover and then it hits us almost off the face of the Earth! In the image you can see a bee laying on the huge human pier, being examined carefully by tiny crime scene investigators! They took a shrinking potion so they could examine the bee more efficiently. A human's 

newspaper hit it round the face, and at the same time broke its leg!

100WC#31 by Leah

Bee Times 

The Mysterious Bee Murder

An Article By Reporter Leah R

 The murder of a hive famous bee (that shall not be named for legal reasons) has been confirmed. Investigators were on the deadly scene early hours yesterday and found no traces of any evidence at all, the FBI are there now double checking. Quotes from the family are below:

Mother: "I miss him so much, whoever murdered him... You should be totally ashamed of yourself."

Father: "I just can not believe my eyes, I can't believe someone would do that to my baby, it is just so unbelievable."

100WC#31 by Alex

These two midget people were sitting down on a very uncomfortable wooden floor next to a huge black and yellow crusty bee lying down in front of the two tiny people with the suitcases next to them. The men were wearing mini oyster white jump suits. The bee was curled up in a little ball in between the two men. Meanwhile one of the men is pulling its leg and the bee is just lying there, dying very slowly, but the two men in the white suits do not seem to be bothered. Hopefully the bee will survive!

100WC#31 by Finlay

In this picture there are two people. One of them is holding a stick that has got a hook on the end. There is also a giant bee which is either dead or asleep. The other person or inspector is holding a camera taking a picture or filming the giant bee. This is my story on how it happened.

Max was walking into town because his mum had annoyingly sent him out to get some ingredients for their tea. Before Max opened the shop door to walk in he looked down and saw the giant, still bee, inspector and photographer!

100WC#31 by Neizan

I think that this picture is of a dead bee that stung a kid and it died on the bench, I think that it stung a kid because it looks like there are 3 or 4 tiny little army men that one of the kids left on the bench so that they could see if he or she was okay from the sting. The other thing I noticed when I last looked at the picture which was on Tuesday that it was kind of at some picnic place and that the 2 children had brought their toys to play with.

100WC#31 by Emily

I can not stop staring at this freakishly large bumble bee that is dead. I have an idea, I will poke it until its mates come and discover that it is dead. Oh but what if they sting me? Never mind I will do it anyway just for fun. 

Then a pack of mildly angry bees arrive ready to sting.

I wish I had not done that… Ahh it stung me and they were wasps.

 NO! 

I am so stupid I should not have done that what if I die, oh no what have I done. 

OH no I am…

100WC#31 by Millie C

Once there were two men who went on holiday and it was really horrible there and so they had to wear white suits. When they got to the airport they were the only people flying to that place because it was so Smokey and horrible. When they got there they found a massive bumble bee lying there on the floor. The men decided to cook the bee and eat it too which I think is really cruel. They made sure it was dead before, so they poked it with a stick and luckily it was completely dead. They ate it.

100WC#31 by Lettia

Plastic people are helping a bee, which may be dead.

They bandage its arm, and undislocate its head.

They carry him to hospital, being cautious.

They feed him food, not very delicious.

Finally he is better, all safe now. 

But then it happens again, how?

So again it has its treatment, to make him far from ill.

Like reversible’s always say, where there’s a way, there’s a will.

Now that was a poem all about bees,

And how they hurt and scrape their knees,

But most importantly, they are quite clumsy, 

And sometimes shout “Where’s my mumsie?”

100WC#31 by Romola

Today is the anniversary of finding the new species of a bee. The 10th of April 2010 was a special day. I am proud to say that I am the cousin of the scientist who found the fairly giant bee.

It was three o'clock in the afternoon and I was just settling to watch a good movie, when BREAKING NEWS appeared on my TV. I quickly put BBC news on to see what was going on. My cousin Timothy was in a white one piece suit. The press were there taking photos of the amazing bee. I was so proud!...