Showing posts with label week 04. Show all posts
Showing posts with label week 04. Show all posts

Saturday, 10 October 2015

Aimee - The noise

Once there was a girl named Chloe, Chloe had a lot of friends. One day Chloe and her friends were walking in vine forest when suddenly they heard a strange noise surrounding them, then in the middle of the noise, there appeared 5 strange men. Chloe was very scared, they all ran off but the men kept following them. They knocked then when the door opened they told Lilly’s grandma’s neighbour what had happened so then the neighbour offered if she could walk them to Lilly’s house.

Friday, 9 October 2015

Kiefer - The Monstrosity

I was walking in the dark damp cave collecting artefacts and all of a sudden a big noise was making me deaf. It was a that bigger noise the ground shook and sharp rocks were falling from the hard rocky ceiling. And I was right in the middle of it. I went in deeper to see what that horrible loud noise was. I kept walking, listening and looking for tracks. But then all of a sudden I bumped into a giant beast. Which has bigger biceps as  you would have ever seen, And amazing muscles. I took a photo. WOW!

Wednesday, 7 October 2015

Harry - The Noise

One day I went to my granddads house because he got a new piano. Im not a fan of music but I can handle a few minutes but not at least half a hour  otherwise I scream  in anger.  So there I was listening to my granddad playing the piano will trying to play anyway  but whilst  I was listening then, in the middle of the noise, was a weird note in my ear. It was just going on an on an on an on and I know my granddad doesn't have any  ghost  so I pressed a button then it worked.

Paris - The Noise

Once a girl called Zia went to her friend's house down South road and her friends name was Aimee her house was as big as a dinosaur! Zia  thought I'm hungry, so she walked over to Aimee and asked her for something to eat. Aimee said "ok." So they both ran to the kitchen, whilst they was getting something to eat they heard a noise. Then in the middle of the noise a monster came out of the cupboard and started to growl! Them to was never ever to be seen again. Both of their mums wondered were they are.

Jessica - the noise

Last night I saw an enormous helicopter that was making a rather large sound then in the middle of the noise there was a long ladder coming down. Then they told me to climb onto the ladder. So I asked them why but they didn't answer. I decided to climb the ladder but I slipped and I hurt my leg so I couldn't get up then a person came down the ladder and it turns out it was my Dad. After he explained that it was his new job. Apparently he wanted to give me a fun ride.

Zia - The noise

One day, a girl named Paris was walking though the wood at night and heard a sound ,and the sound was a scary and weird noise. She thought something was going to happen to her, she thought that maybe she would die. Paris was looking around and saw a haunted house and went straight in. Inside there was a windy stair case witch creaked when you walked up. Paris walked up and then the the noise got louder and louder then, in the middle of the noise she found a ghost and ran out and that was the end of Paris.

Tuesday, 6 October 2015

William - Then in the middle of noise.

On a gloomy night we were walking down the road then I saw something small on the ground I was chasing it all around because I was trying to get my dog. It ran out when I was getting something out of the car then he was running mad and I lost him. I was really scared because I didn’t know where he was I was looking everywhere and he could not protect himself and then I heard a bark. Then I heard a car beep then it was a bark then a beep, bark then beep so I went to look then, in the middle of the noise was my dog.

Tia M - Then in the middle of noise.

One day I was at school and we was doing music it was so fun I was playing the drums then in the middle of the noise  there was a big boom it was really loud. It was in the playground we all ran outside to see what it was it was an airplane that had crashed there was a person in it we all tried to help then the head teacher came out. He came to save the person who was in the plane then one of the teachers ran inside to run into the school to ring the hospital.

Kaci – The scary sound.


When I was walking down the street at night I heard a sound. It was screaming and shouting it was bursting my precious ears. So I went nearer and nearer. I looked up and I saw two people fighting and I heard a baby crying. Oh no I need to call someone. Who to call?

I will call the police and an ambulance. “Hello can I have the police please." Then she put the phone down and she was banging on the door to see what’s going on. I saw the police car and an ambulance. They came and sorted things out.

Tia A – The mysterious Puddle.



When I woke up I wanted to go to the park but it was raining really bad so I went and got my wellies on and rain coat and I walked to the park when I got to the park. I saw loads of puddles so I jumped in them all except one big gold one I saw near the slide. I walked up to it then in the middle of the noise was a pink and blue ring I took it out and I saw some children beside me they said, "take it home and put it somewhere safe."

Tyler S – The ginormous conker


I was just walking across the park, picking conkers, but then, in the middle of the noise from the grand oak tree, in the middle of the park, fell a ginormous, over-sized conker! It took 12 fire trucks, 50 local citizens (most of them didn't have a clue what they're doing!) and me well, I didn't do 'that' much. A couple of hours later, this guy with a big axe chopped off the shell completely. “YES!" I yelled.

"YES!" All the citizens and fire fighters yelled. And to celebrate we had a ginormous party and feast.

Rhianna – Celebrity Kidnap



In the six weeks holidays, I went to see Sam Smith. It was really exciting, partly because it was the real Sam Smith, but also because of something else. He was playing his best ever track, "Stay with me" and then, in the middle of the noise, there came an unexpected arrival. A man went on the stage, and started trying to kidnap Sam! "Help!" Sam shouted. Luckily, the security got on top of the situation. To say the least, the security were strong. I wondered what it would be like trying to kidnap the one and only Sam Smith?

Dalton – Then in the middle of the noise



Yesterday, up town,  I was in the library on the laptops researching about Greeks for my homework and suddenly everybody started talking then in the middle of the noise the was a massive bang and the everyone was scared so they all hid under the table but no one knew what it was but we was getting attacked by robbers. I called the police and then the police came really quick to arrest the robbers and then the police took away the robbers to jail and then we all  went back to work and then I finished my work.

Jack S – The noise



Once I was walking down town when I heard a strange sound I didn't know what the sound was so I followed the sound. I walked for hours and hours trying to find what was making the noise but then, in the middle of the noise I saw a bird it was fine with the noise it didn't seem to mind at all. It was like it didn't hear the noise or it was deaf but then I finally found the beast it was a lion it was screaming but then it saw me and ran away.

Frankie – Then at the moment

One day I was walking down the street and saw a car with a really loud horn and it honked at me. Then in the middle of the noise I went silent I could not hear I fell to the floor and I could hear the noise like a flash bang and then I saw an ambulance as I fell to the ground. I woke up in a hospital bed and a nurse was there then I said "What happened" she said "You had an accident" so then I got out of bed and walked out I said "Bye”.

Anesha – The noise



I went to my friend’s party and I walked home and got dressed for bed and went down stairs to get a drink and I walked back up the stairs and got in bed and fell asleep. But I got up in then in the middle of the noise I heard a ghost go I’m coming to kill you so I ran in my mums room and said I just heard a ghost say I’m coming to kill you. So I cuddled up to my mum and fell fast to sleep. The next morning I went to playout.

Mia – Then in the middle of the noise



Then, in the middle of the noise I saw a flashing light I was terrified it was coming right towards me I quickly ran as fast as I could suddenly I fell and hit my head. I blacked out when I awoke I saw a women standing in front of me I sat up and said "who are you" she said "I am nelly I am a baker "then she helped me up. We walked along a yellow brick path it was nice and calm where I was then we started to see a city it was beautiful it was....

Nicole – The Scary Noise

When I was walking at night and it was very dark and I had to go to the shop my parents told me to buy a delicious chocolate cake with sprinkles on. But then, in the middle of the noise I heard someone screaming and shouting loudly that I got frightened. I quickly went to buy that cake and ran home we ate it but it’s better than just a plain one. It is my favourite cake that's why I always pick it. My parents is chocolate cake too. My brother is small but he likes it as well.

Cloud – The Noise

It was Friday evening and Kaycee and Emily were going to have a sleepover, Kaycee was a year older than Emily, she was ten years old and their mum`s were best friends. Once they arrived at Kaycee’s they both put their onesies on. Until they heard a mysterious sound like a roar... Until they realized it was Kaycee`s older brother Charlie that was making the sound on his Xbox one. Until suddenly ...then, in the middle of the noise... A huge monster leaped out from the wardrobe and this time it wasn`t Kaycee’s older brother!

Lisa – Then in the middle of the noise

One night I was walking in the woods and I saw my friends cloud, Tyler, Kiefer and Mia , they were walking eating popcorn and they were wearing fancy clothes "where have you been?" I said. The evidence that they had been somwere was because of what they were wearing. "we went swimming and then after we went to a great  birthday party nearly the whole year group was there!" Replied Mia. "oh , I could not make it to that party because I did not feel very well" I replied " are you ok now" BANG! “what was that!" Said Tyler "I do not know" said Kiefer

BANG! "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"