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Sunday, 23 March 2014

…look up! Can you see… by Finli

"Look up! Can you see that?" Harry mutters.
"What?"
"That sparkle." The sparkle grown and grown as the two got closer.
"He-llo."
"Greetings how can I help you?"
"I would like to go home."
"I'm afraid I can't help you. But I can give you three wishes."
"Great!"
Without delay Harry and Sam already made their first wish.
"Firstly: I would like to be rich."
"Arrgh a classic one" the sparkle muttered while clearing his thought, “You're wish is my command!"
Within a second bags of money came raining down from the sky.

"It’s like paradise!" Harry echoed a shout.

Saturday, 22 March 2014

…look up! Can you see… by Anh


Jack and William were playing football outside. 
Everything was normal until Jack looked into the sky. "Look up! Can you see the spaceship?" He said in awe. William stopped and looked. They both saw something that defiantly wasn't a plane - It looked like something from Star Wars! 
After that, neither of them said anything until Will broke the silence. "We need to tell somebody about this! We'll get rich and famous for discovering aliens!" Jack agreed so they went inside to tell their parents. "Mum, Dad! There's a spaceship!" They squealed. No-one believed them so they went in the garden again. The spaceship had GONE.

…look up! Can you see… by Talia

Look up! Can you see?” shouted Bella.
“ See what!” exclaimed Paris.
“That ….thing heading down to Earth.” explained Bella.
“ What!” said Paris horrified. 
There was a meteor heading down to Earth straight in the girls direction. What were they going to do?
“Bellarrrrrrr what shall we do?” trembled Paris
“Ruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun!” screamed Bella.
There was no hope there had to be a miracle to happen to save them! Suddenly a person came flying through the air.
“Hi I am Supernan. How can I help?” An old lady said.
“There is a thing coming this way.” They both said.
“O yes there is!”

Dragon and I by Jake


It was Saturday night, my friend Harley and I went for a stroll into the Leafy Forest to play around, but I saw something moving in the sky? Is it a bird or a plane, my gosh “Harley look up! Can you see it soaring through the sky?”
“What? Where? There it is!”
It then swooped down to the ground, it disappeared into the dark. Then behind me was a dragon, it stroked me lovingly with its tongue. So I hopped onto his back. Harley climbed on too. We flew through the dark sky, soaring and gliding…

The Eclipse by Lettia


Today, the school kids were very excited, this was because of the eclipse which was happening quite soon. One of the girls shouted “Look up! Can you see?”
“Yes!!” Another replied. Indeed, they were talking about the eclipse. It had come,… And so quickly. Suddenly everything went dark, as the sun hid behind complete darkness. But within a couple of minutes, it was all over.

The children groaned and sighed, some of them even remarked “Oh! It’s done,” and they ran off into the classroom, leaving the sun to recover. The others, well…

…look up! Can you see… by Giuseppe

Archie was in his bedroom playing on the Xbox when suddenly his friends came over. His friend Peter said, "Let’s go to the park on such a sunny day?"
"Ok" Archie said.
When they stepped outside there was no one on a beautiful sunny summer day, "Where is everyone?” said Chris.
“Nooooooooobody cares!" Archie said.
 It took them five minutes to get there they saw nobody it’s like the whole human species has gone. But suddenly an old scruffy man comes and said, "…look up! Can you see…?”

“What... What are you making us see old man?" said Peter. VSOOM a gigantic alien space ship appeared!

Look up! Can you see... by Neizan

In the forest at school were three five year old little girls, they were all one of those pink girly girls. The first little girl had long silky brownie golden hair that is normally platted in both sides she was called Lily. The other little girls were both twins and looked exactly the same, both with blond curly hair and dark blue eyes. In the forest one day all three girls were there and one of the said “Look up! Can you see that man in the air, I think he’s flying”
“Yes, yes he is,” they said in amazement.” 

Look up! Can you see! by Romola

"Good afternoon children!" Said the head teacher Mrs Young.
"Good afternoon Mrs Young," said the school children tiredly.
"Today each one of you children will get an Easter egg decorator kit. Seeing as it is nearly Easter. The person who-" Mrs Young got rudely interrupted by the commotion in the hallway.
"But I'm telling you I definitely saw it!" Whined the mysterious voice.
"You are just seeing things, you stupid weirdo!" Squealed the second voice. The whole room filled with a gasp from the children.
"Look up! Can you see!" Said the first voice.
"Oh yeah. Sorry everyone nothing to see here. Sorry,"
"Embarrassing!"

Wednesday, 19 March 2014

…look up! Can you see… by Leah

“Look up! Can you see all of the beautiful stars shining high up in the sky?” I exclaimed.All of the stars were shining bright in the clear sky, they were sparkling, and it was magical. The full, bright moon glistened and sparkled, you could clearly see the stars glimmering in the distance. The stars were glittering in the dark sky. They were shimmering, twinkling, gleaming and they were sparkling! They were more than beautiful; they were gorgeous, lovely, and delightful. The moon was dazzling and shimmering in the sky in my opinion it was astonishing and very, very wonderful.

…look up! Can you see.. by Millie C

Once there was a giant that controlled all the clouds and one day he put all the clouds together so no one could see the sun and they couldn't see the blue sky either. There was one girl called Sarah and she flew up in a plane into the sky. Then she went outside the plane and climbed on top of the plane and jumped onto a cloud. She carried on walking and saw the giant in the distance so she ran up to him and pulled out her sword and killed him. Look up! Can you see that the clouds are splitting up! YEY!  

…look up! Can you see… by Finlay

One day Fred was outside riding his bike with his best friend Tom they enjoyed riding their bikes and going into the tall woods. So every day after their long, hard school time they would venture into the woods. After that they rode down a small, windy path made of concrete and then Fred muttered to Tom "Look up! Can you see that strange shadow glaring right at us." Eventually Tom looked up to see for himself and what he saw was absolutely incredible! It was white and green and it was shaped exactly like an oval. Its a SPACESHIP!

…look up! Can you see… by Amy

Early one morning I was awoken by the pain of my broken wrist. Carefully I dragged myself out of bed. I couldn't believe how early it was. Maybe I could have a party. Suddenly I realised what day it was. It was my Mum's birthday. I thought of something that would make a huge smile on her face. A SURPRISE PARTY! So I quickly invited as many people as possible. Then prepared the cake. Then made the room all pretty. After 2 hours of hard work the guests arrived. Two seconds after they arrived we had to shout, "Surprise." You should have seen the smile on her face. I got my Mum and said, "Look up! Can you see?" 
She said, "Yes it is very beautiful."
Mum had the best birthday ever.

…look up! Can you see…by Joshua

I was walking down a small alleyway when I came across a tiny door on one side of the wall. There was a lock where it looked like you needed a key. I looked around and I saw it, the key to the door. But then I felt a hand grab my arm. He said as quickly as he came “Stop, look up! Can you see that?” He quickly pointed upwards to the top of the door frame. It said KEEP OUT. IF YOU ENTER YOU WILL ONLY FIND DEATH! BEWARE. He ignored the sign and entered. But he faced his worst nightmare. BANG!!!!!!!!!!!!