Showing posts with label Eleanor. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Eleanor. Show all posts

Saturday, 17 November 2018

Eleanor - Bricks Gorilla Yellow Running Pretty


Fluffy white clouds hung in the endless blue sky while birds sang as they passed. A lady walked by the zoo, she had white blonde hair and electric blue eyes. Suddenly she heard a noise, and through the wall crashed a hairy gorilla! Bricks flew in every direction, she screamed and started running, but the gorilla caught her! She tried to escape but ripped the sleeve of her yellow polka dot jumper. The ape ran away never to be seen again. As for the lady she was pretty careful around the zoo, watching for crazy monkeys while she passed it.

Friday, 9 November 2018

Eleanor -…I wondered what was behind the door…

I walked down the overgrown path, tripping over a loose stone in the darkness. The old house was grey with broken bricks and ugly stone gargoyles. As I pushed open the heavy stone door I heard a deep voice say, "When the clock strikes 12...beware!". Something slithered down my spine and I froze. The clock turned 12.

I ran on but kept finding my way back to the same door, the wind was whistling outside. I wondered what was behind the door. Suddenly it opened and I was dragged inside, It had caught me. 

I never saw daylight again...

Saturday, 27 October 2018

Ladybirds by Eleanor

Strange things had started happening, creatures had begun to attack their enemies, Lego figures! One brave figure named Dave went to get them to leave Lego Land. As he walked into their home he started to feel something crawl up his body, out of the abyss of a cave came... LADYBIRDS! The most evil insect, they were bright orange and ate Lego figures but the ladybirds didn't know that Dave had a weapon, INSECT REPELLANT! As they moved forward Dave sprayed them and they froze and pleaded for forgiveness. They were so scared that they never went near Lego again.

Saturday, 20 October 2018

Bath Fighter Danced Orange Clumsily, by Eleanor


Stars were gleaming in the navy blue sky. An odd looking man clumsily stumbled out of an orange building. I wondered what had happened to him so I went up to ask him about it. I wasn't expecting the response he gave me, he told me an amazing story...
He was Jim Mcbash the most famous fighter that ever lived. Every person he faced lost and hit the floor heavily. THUD! And every fight he would do his dance. He danced lots! It wasn't Jim who danced one match.
The only the thing he fought again was his bath water.

Saturday, 13 October 2018

…it reminded me of a time when…by Eleanor

I walked into the forest it looked normal On the outside. When you got in, it wasn't. Bare trees swayed in the wind and mud lay on the floor. Out of nowhere wolves howled in the distance, then they came chasing after me and I knew what to do... RUN! I sprinted, faster, faster! It reminded me of a time when I was young when my friends chased me. I snapped out of it as soon as I heard them howl again. I ran on knowing this was the end, but it wasn't I barely escaped with my life, somehow.

Sunday, 23 September 2018

Teacher Alligator Mauve Climbed Tricky, by Eleanor

My teacher got attacked by an alligator once, the alligator's skin was mauve;
My teacher got attacked by an alligator once, it had a car it always drove.
My teacher got attacked by an alligator once, to get away she climbed up high;
My teacher got attacked by an alligator once, she climbed up to the sky.
My teacher got attacked by an alligator once, to escape was tricky;
My teacher got attacked by an alligator once, the alligator's name was Ricky.
My teacher attacked an alligator once, she even swallowed it whole, 
Well, that's the story that she told! 

Saturday, 8 September 2018

...but what colour should it be? by Eleanor

It was a Friday, and I was looking forward to my first spy mission, so after the sun had gone down I set off to headquarters.  I was on the way to the case. I had to be fast as it was a serious crime. A bomb had been planted and we needed to defuse it before it exploded!  I worked at the bomb while everyone escaped. TIC, TIC, TIC. I needed to be quick. TIC, TIC, TIC. All I needed to do was cut the wire but what colour should it be?  I cut blue... BOOM! Oops, wrong wire!  

Sunday, 12 July 2015

"…but I’m afraid it’s the last one," he said… Eleanor

“Today we are going to build a tree house!” I shouted across the room to my mum and dad. 

“OK. But where are we going to find all this wood?” questioned my dad.
“We will go to the store.” I said proudly. So we dot in the car to B&Q to get some lovely soft planks of wood. When we got there we looked around the store. We asked a man where they were. He directed us then he said “But I’m afraid it’s the last one,” he said looking down at me and my dad. I really wanted a tree house but I suppose you can’t have everything. 

...but it was far too hot... by Eleanor

Today I was going to go to friends but it was far too hot for that. So I decided to go swimming with all my family. We got our things and I did all sorts in the pool. Like cartwheels walkovers and backwards walkovers. It was amazingly fun. I asked my mum if we could go next week and she said we could. I cannot wait! Also in the pool I learnt how to swim further than I can (which is 5m). After that we went to Burger King I had a lovely dinner. After that it was time to go home because I had dancing soon.

Sunday, 28 June 2015

…some of the words sounded like a foreign language..., by Eleanor

Today was so strange I was on the bus to go to visit someone in town. I was just about to get on the bus when I heard some people talking. Some of the words sounded like a foreign language but I knew some of the words. As I was listening to their conversation I heard some words like bonjour, au revoir and a bientot I knew they were French words. So I decided to just get on the bus and get to town because I was already late. Once I was there we went shopping and I decided to speak French but I don't know why!

Sunday, 21 June 2015

But where could I go? by Eleanor

Yesterday, I was thinking if I could go anywhere in the world, where would I go? I could go to America but that was too far away my mum said. My dad suggested why not go to China. They do have pretty cool stuff there. But where could I go? My brothers thought of Africa to see the animals. But I thought that would be scary. Then I thought of all the places I could go; France, Italy, Spain and Australia. Then I realised why go visiting far off lands when everything I need was right before my eyes.

Saturday, 13 June 2015

Cauliflower Crimson Shivering Deep Walked by Eleanor

It was cold it was the start of winter and it was snowing. I started shivering as I got in the car to Tesco. My mum was taking me to get some chicken, pizza and cauliflower. As I walked out of the car I heard a man with a deep voice. He had a crimson car. Also he had brown hair and green eyes. As he talked more his voice got louder and louder. We went into the shop and got everything we needed apart from the pizza because they had no left. Anyway we got home threw the rain and snow.

Saturday, 6 June 2015

…but it made my tongue tingle… Eleanor




I was just on the web when I found out that there was a new flavour popping candy! I was so excited I just had to try it. So I told my friend about the popping candy, she said "A new flavour popping candy, amazing!" Me and my friend went into town to get it. The new flavour was, banana. I went straight to the shop, it cost £2.50. I tried it but it made my tongue tingle. I started to dance - it was so much fun. It was amazing because I started to sing. It was the best time!

Sunday, 31 May 2015

So as she lifted the lid by Eleanor


Today is two days before my 10th birthday. I was given a £50 voucher so I am going into town to spend it in Claire's. Before going my brother, my mum, Belle and I are going to my Nan’s house.

Once we got there I had my breakfast. We went into town and I bought some sweets. I asked for a sweet from the jar so as she lifted the lid of the jar I picked a lolly pop. When we got home we made my birthday cake. Me and my mum went shopping in Tesco and we got a lot of food.

Wednesday, 20 May 2015

...but the ferocious wind...by Eleanor

As the day went on I started to get more bored. So I decided to go out on a walk to the sea front. As soon as I was there I could smell the donuts cooking in the shops. I was going to go in the sea but the ferocious wind was blowing. I could see the enormous waves coming out of the sea and I could hear them roaring. I could taste the salt on my lips from the salty water. I could feel the wind blowing against me it was that hard. It was very cold.

Saturday, 16 May 2015

Eleanor - 100WC#32

One day I saw a little man climb up a tree stump to come across a big chicken. The little man knew he was in trouble because his is tiny and the chicken is massive.The little man tried to step away but it was too late because as soon as he backed away the chicken would squeak and hiss at him. In front of him there were some seeds, the chicken wanted them but the man was on an adventure and all he had was a drink of orange juice.

Sunday, 10 May 2015

100WC#31 Adapting Fairytales

The challenge this week was due to adapt a fairytale to celebrate the birth of the new royal baby.

Snowflake and the 7 trolls by Jessica 
Once upon a time there lived a princess called Snowflake and she lived with 7 Trolls in the side of mountain. While Snowflake was living with the 7 Trolls her mother (The Queen) was on a hunt to kill her. It was very hard for Snowflake to keep running away from her horrible mother. The worst thing about Snowflake’s mother was that her mother was a witch so it was ten times harder to stay alive and survive. Every time Snowflake wanted to get away from the mountain the Trolls had to stay by her side.

Rapunzel by Sam B
Rapunzel was taking a stroll in the woods like she always did on a normal Sunday. She went past a tree and found a tall tower that stood in a massive steep crater. 
"Help! Help! I am stuck," shouted a voice from below. Rapunzel quickly sped towards a steep edge. 
"Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair," begged a knight at the bottom of the stone castle.
"How do you know my name?" asked Rapunzel. The knight did not say a thing. Rapunzel let down her hair and the lost knight climbed up her long hair up to the top.

Cinderella by Mollie 
Once upon a time when I was just a little child, a new royal family member arrived. Her name was Ella. When Ella was just four years old her mother died. After that an evil woman married her father. She had two daughters. They had taken Ella's room and so she had to sleep by the fire in the attic. The evil step mother used Ella as a slave. The two step sisters made fun of the ashes in her hair and called her Cinderella. Later on the family went out for a slow walk. The step-family got lost in the forest and were never seen again and Cinderella lived happily ever after.

Rapunzel by Morgan
Once lived a young girl named Rapunzel she was born with long brown hair a woman named Mother Gothal adopted the child but all she really wanted was her hair because Rapunzel's hair was magical. It healed the hurt and made Mother Gothal look and act younger. Rapunzel found out what was going on so she ran away and chopped all her hair off and turned blonde. A man named Flynn Rider came along and loved Rapunzel the moment he saw her and she loved him they both fell in love and got married Rapunzel's mother never knew what happened!

Hansel and Gretel Sam F
Once upon a time there was a small cottage. Inside there was a Mum, Dad and two little boys. One day we realised that we did not have enough food for our family. So the father brought his two boys into the forest and left them behind. When it started to get dark the boys had nowhere to go. Suddenly they saw a massive gingerbread house. So they ran as fast as they could to the door so they could go inside. As they knocked on the door a kind lady said, "You can stay here as long as you want."
The end.

Beauty and the Beast by Eleanor
Once upon a time there lived a very beautiful princess in a shining castle. The princess was so naughty she slurped her drinks; she even jumped on the table at dinner and she broke wind. 
One night an old man came to the castle. He wanted warmth from the rain and horrible weather. The princess took one look at the man and walked away slamming the castle door behind her. In one second the old man changed himself into a handsome prince. After that the prince transformed her into a hideous beast and put a powerful spell on the entire castle.



Sleeping Beauty by Madison
One day a baby princess was born and every one came to see her and nearly everyone was invited. Then there were some fairies called Sparkle, Glitter and Shine they all gave the baby Victoria a very nice present. Then an evil human sized fairy named Dark Widow swooped in and said, "Oh why was I not invited!" and she got angry and cursed baby Victoria so that when she was 18 she would fall on a bush of thorns and go to sleep for millions of years and only true love’s kiss could save her....................

Cinderella / Royalella by Jemima 
Long ago, there lived a young girl named Royella. Her mum had died years ago, that meant she'd never get a sister. So instead she decided to try and have a baby. Soon, she became pregnant. Everything was going according to plan when all of a sudden her father got married to Claireaphene, a very evil lady. Royalella's father wasn't aware that she was evil, but Royalella was. Royalella's new stepmother told her she wasn't allowed to have a baby. A while after, Royalella met the man of her dreams. They moved to Candy-land together. Royalella soon had her baby, it was named Charlotte.

Red Riding Hood by Rose 
My favourite fairy tale story is Little Red Riding Hood because it is fun to read. 
Once upon a time Little Red Riding Hood, Millie, went to bring her brother some ham and mustard because he had run out of food. As she was outside of his bedroom she saw a rat who jumped onto her shoulder. The rat was named Cow, he was Millie's brothers pet. When Millie skipped into her brother’s room she put down the food on his bedside table and popped Cow back into his cage. But she hadn't shut the bars properly, so Cow hopped out of the cage and into the wardrobe where he made a den. He did a little poo in Millie's brother’s best clothes. Millie had to sell Cow because he did a poo everywhere.

Red Riding Hood by Grace LB
There was a little girl called Red Riding Hood and she was on her way to see her granny, she walked there every week and her mother always warned her about the big bad bunny, he would steal your goodies and Red was giving granny cupcakes, but she didn't believe her. On her way she thought to herself, “How could a bunny be so scary.” She suddenly heard something behind her and then she only had one cupcake. Then she ran to her granny's house and gave her the cupcake, but all the bunny wanted was her carrot cupcakes.  

Goldilocks and the Three Bears by Charlie
There was once three royal family members. Prince William was big bear, Princes Kate was Mummy bear and Prince George was baby bear. One day they walked to the Castle in Kensington Forest where they were served with three bowls of Rice Krispies, they poured over the cold milk and listened as they went’ "SNAP", "CRACKLE" and an "ENORMOUS POP", when out jumped a little princess called Charlotte Elizabeth. The princess soon became part of the Royal family and couldn't wait to see her granny, the "Queen". Princess Charlotte was welcomed by the Queen into the arms of the Royal Family.

Goldilocks and the Three Monkeys by Harvey
Once upon time in the rain forest a girl called Goldilocks saw a treetop house so she climbed up and saw three wooden plates with bananas on them. Daddy’s banana was too ripe, Mummy’s wasn’t ripe enough and baby’s was just right. There were chairs made out of branches, Daddy’s was too rough, Mummy’s too thin and baby’s was just right. Then she saw three hammocks’, Daddy’s was too itchy Mummy’s was too scratchy and Baby’s was just right. The monkeys arrived back to find her sleeping and swung her out of the hammock she awoke and Goldilocks ran away.

Cinderella by Chloe
One day there lived two ugly sisters, a step mother and Ella Cinders. They were rich and loved their life except from Ella. She hated life and always moaned about it, well she didn’t exactly moan, she wrote about it in her wish diary. It had sixteen wishes ready for her birthday (tomorrow). She was excited and was ready to roll, but unfortunately for her she couldn’t have a party because her step mother and two sisters wouldn’t let her. She got angry about this and she stole money off her sisters to buy the beautiful dress. 
“ELLA, WHERE’S MY MONEY!!!”…

Gingerbread man by Aron
Once upon a time, lived an old man called Pat. He was lonely because his only daughter moved far away. Pat loved to bake. One day, he used a magical powder he got from his daughter. She said to use it when he feels lonely. He decided to make a big gingerbread man. After putting him in the oven it started to shatter! A massive blasting beam of blinding light came out from the old oven... The gingerbread man was alive! Pat didn't have to be alone anymore, he had a great companion and he called him Gingi.
And they lived happily ever after...

Cinderella by Caitlin 
There was a girl called Cinderella who was invited to a ball with her two ugly step sisters. When they arrived the prince was there. Cinderella danced with the prince until the clock struck 12, Cinderella ran out of the palace, leaving her shoe behind. The next morning the prince went to see whose foot it should fit. One of the ugly sisters heard of this and had an old witch cast a spell on her that any shoe she tried would fit. The shoe fit and on the day she married the prince he turned into a penniless pauper.

Saturday, 9 May 2015

Eleanor - 100WC#30

One day a little girl ran to the shop with her mum and dad. She was so looking forward to getting a toy lion because everyone wants it. The little girl danced round the shop and when she got the lion she named it cornflake. I never knew that the lion looked so exciting to play with because he has a really big smile on his face. When I got home I heard the noise of a drum I wondered where it was coming from. I looked in my room and I saw the real lion toy playing the drums.

Saturday, 25 April 2015

Eleanor - X Marks the Spot

One day I came to the conclusion that I was going on a treasure hunt. My dad told me that we had one in the loft so I went up there and searched everywhere. Once I found it, it was covered in dust and it had a few stains on it. Anyway I called my friends and asked if they wanted to help me. My very best friend came round and said, "Come on x marks the spot!" We raced off into the distance and found a maze. I lead everyone into the maze. It was so much fun.

Wednesday, 25 March 2015

Eleanor - My Ultimate Adventure

Dear Diary,
Today is the day that I am going to do my ultimate adventure. Whilst I was back home in England I was running and preparing myself. I have ran 10 miles every day in preparation for my ultimate adventure. It has been hard and tiring but it will be worth it as I am raising money for a good cause. I really want to do this to help other people and be like Sir Ranulph Fiennes because he helped other people as well. I am going to run through the Moroccan Sahara Desert and through the most brilliant places all around the world!