Caitlin - 100WC#30

As I gazed out of the kitchen window I had a feeling that this was going to be an exciting day, as I crunched on a cornflake. “Are you sure you are ready for your first day at the zoo?” asked mum cautiously. 

“Yes I am sure,” I replied confidently. I grabbed my bag off the table and left. 

As I started to walk down the street I glanced into a window to see a class as they danced. As I arrived at the zoo, it wasn't the hum drum of a normal day. The lion seemed to stare when I realised the cage door was open!

Aron - 100WC#30

In the south part of the Africa lived a friendly lion Stan. Every morning Stan ate his healthy breakfast and brushed his teeth. Even though, Stan found it very exciting when brushing his teeth, one morning he found it hard to brush as one stubborn cornflake got stuck in between his teeth. Stan got very frustrated and asked his friend monkey to help him with his problem. Monkey was busy playing her drum however she agreed to help. She used dry straw of grass to clean in between lion's teeth and managed to take the cornflake out. Stan danced with happiness.

Chloe - 100WC#30

“MINE!" squealed little lion in anger as monkey snatched his cornflake drum off him. "IT’S MI-INE!” screeched monkey as little lion grabbed the toy and ran off into the Exciting Forest where the Tootlers danced and the Suckers squawked. “Oh no, because me and little lion were fighting he has gone into the dangerous Exciting Forest!” monkey knew that his friend was in danger and needed to go and save him. But what could he do? He had no idea, all he knew was that his friend was in danger and was his fault… 

Harvey - 100WC#30

As we sat on the grassy area eating our lunch, I was able to watch the lion wonder around its enclosure it looked so peaceful and calm, I couldn’t believe I was so close to such an amazing powerful animal.

Just as I began to eat my cornflake cake a loud drum roll started and music started to play. We all turned to where the sound was coming from It was the chimp enclosure they one by one they came out side all dressed up and danced to the music it was hilarious and exciting to see. I love zoos.

Charlie - 100WC#30

Yesterday while I was eating cornflakes for breakfast I was very excited, because we were going to have a great day. We went to see Madagascar at the cinema it was very exciting and funny. There were lots of animals in the film there was a zebra called Marty, the giraffe was called Melman, the hippo was called Gloria and the lion was called Alex. The best part of the film was when the animals danced to the beat of the drum. Then out came the penguins of Madagascar: Skipper, Kowalski, Rico and Private, whilst singing, "You like to move it," with King Julian the raccoon!

Grace LB - 100WC#30

Today we were going to the zoo and I was so excited. My sister played her drum (like she does every morning) and my little brother was shouting, “Cornflake! Cornflake!” When we got to the zoo there were zebras and spotty leopard and lions and every animal you could think of, and as soon as I saw the otters I happily danced over there and stared at them thinking, “cute!” It was all so exciting, and I had an amazing day, and that's why I am writing this, because I am going back there today and I am very excited. 

Rose - 100WC#30

Yesterday I went to the zoo at 1:00 pm. I was in the car for ages. Luckily my mum packed some crisps and lemonade. I ate loads. After I had eaten everything my sister Megan started moaning at me because I had eaten most of her things. When we got there, we went to see a zebra. It was so funny because it had a drum and did this really weird face. Next we went to see a lion. It was sitting in the corner of its enclosure eating cornflakes. When it saw us coming it got up and danced like a superstar. I thought it was actually amazing. Yesterday was really exciting.

Olivia - 100WC#30

One day I woke up and I went down stairs, I got a CORNFLAKE and while I was eating my cornflakes I DANCED around like something was really EXCITING but actually I was listening to music and the song was called LION and it has this really loud DRUM beat in the song and that really annoyed because it hurt my ears. So I got up to turn it off but when I was trying to turn it off I accidentally hit the loud button so it was really loud, then I tried to turn down but when I was trying to turn it down it turned up even louder so I chucked it on the floor and it broke and smashed then I just went to go back to bed.

Sophia - 100WC#30

“Harry I know you are excited but keep the noise down with your drum set please!” politely asked Harry’s Mother.

Suddenly, the noise fell silent, all that Harry’s Mother heard was Harry’s sister’s lion game. The next morning Harry took the cornflake box from the shelf, when from the corner of Harry’s eye he noticed the drumming competition. Before thinking, Harry begged his Mother to enter. She refused to let Harry for the next few hours until she got annoyed. His Mother agreed, Harry was over the moon with delight, thrilled he danced on the table.

(he lost the competition)

Jemima - 100WC#30

I went to the circus with my dad yesterday, it was amazing. There were, lions, tigers, dogs and even crocodiles! I think it was cruel to keep animals like that, but it was a great show. My dad bought me some candy floss and my hands and face got really sticky. Anyway, there was a lion that danced, a dog that did tricks with a cornflake, and there was a big group of crocodiles, and they each had a drum that they banged on with their great big noses. It was so exciting. I had a great time watching those animals.

Eleanor - 100WC#30

One day a little girl ran to the shop with her mum and dad. She was so looking forward to getting a toy lion because everyone wants it. The little girl danced round the shop and when she got the lion she named it cornflake. I never knew that the lion looked so exciting to play with because he has a really big smile on his face. When I got home I heard the noise of a drum I wondered where it was coming from. I looked in my room and I saw the real lion toy playing the drums.

Sam F -100WC#30

One day it was my birthday and I invited my family to come to my house. When they arrived someone gave me a massive present. As soon as they gave me the present it was exciting to see what I received. I opened it and it was a drum kit. When I was playing with the drums the lights turned off. Suddenly my mum was carrying a lion themed cake and was singing happy birthday to me. Before I was about to eat the lion cake my dad said, "There are cornflake cakes in the kitchen." At the end of the party everyone danced.

Morgan - 100WC#30

This morning I was eating my cornflakes I was just about to eat my last cornflake that's when I heard a drum roll I was confused. Then came a lion who danced round my kitchen doing the tango! I don't know what was happening but it was exciting so I carried on watching the lion dance and the drum noises. I was just about to eat my last cornflake but then a bullet came shooting through my window! I screamed in fear then came another and another and another was I going to live or will I die? "We got her boss just like you said," the lion announced, "perfect!"

Sam B - 100WC#30

Dad walked into the room. He saw his kids watching an adverts on TV. A drum roll sound came from the TV. BING!
"Co-co pops cornflakes are delicious and crunchy," said a voice on the TV. A crocodile on the TV sped over to a bowl of cornflakes. Suddenly, he fell in a hole that was covered in leaves. The screen switched to a monkey, a hippo, a giraffe and a lion. They all danced with their cornflakes. The advert went off and another one came on. Dad left the room. 
"Weird and exciting adverts," murmured Dad.