Showing posts with label Caitlin. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Caitlin. Show all posts

Sunday, 12 July 2015

"…but I'm afraid it’s the last one," he said… Caitlin

“Mum can I buy a chocolate box for tonight please?” begged Ben. 
“No, we don’t need them we already have some chocolates in the basket” explained mum.
“Why can’t I? Please I will share them,” he replied.
“Fine if you really must and be back by tea” huffed Mum.
“OK I will.”
So Ben went to get some chocolate and was back before tea. After tea Ben got out the chocolates and started to scoff them down.
“Could I have one Ben as you said you would share them?” asked mum.
“But I’m afraid it’s the last one," he said.
“Ben give me one!” 

“I suppose I am being healthy!”

Wednesday, 20 May 2015

...but the ferocious wind... by Caitlin

Lightning strikes big and bad,
Slowly it moves away, now everyone’s is glad,
Raindrops bounce fast and heavy,
Then all the rain goes slow and steady,
Clouds lighten fast and slow,
This doesn't really help the plants grow,
But the ferocious wind blows the sun bright,
Strong enough to fly a kite,
The mist covers up the sky,
So you can’t see each other’s bow tie,
Dampness makes you feel cold and down,
This makes things look so rundown,
Thunder is loud and scary,
Making people feel very weary,
The snow fall deep and thick,
This made the world fall quiet.

Saturday, 16 May 2015

Caitlin - 100WC#32

There was a lady who lived in enchanted forest, nobody believed in her or liked her. But she wanted to prove them all wrong. So the following morning she crept out of the enchanted forest in to the open world. When she reached the park there was strange giant towering above her. When she had arrived at a tree stump she tripped over some bird feed and when she looked up she saw a dark black crow leaning towards her. It flew and pushed her. What was it going to do next? And where was the bird going to take her? 

Sunday, 10 May 2015

100WC#31 Adapting Fairytales

The challenge this week was due to adapt a fairytale to celebrate the birth of the new royal baby.

Snowflake and the 7 trolls by Jessica 
Once upon a time there lived a princess called Snowflake and she lived with 7 Trolls in the side of mountain. While Snowflake was living with the 7 Trolls her mother (The Queen) was on a hunt to kill her. It was very hard for Snowflake to keep running away from her horrible mother. The worst thing about Snowflake’s mother was that her mother was a witch so it was ten times harder to stay alive and survive. Every time Snowflake wanted to get away from the mountain the Trolls had to stay by her side.

Rapunzel by Sam B
Rapunzel was taking a stroll in the woods like she always did on a normal Sunday. She went past a tree and found a tall tower that stood in a massive steep crater. 
"Help! Help! I am stuck," shouted a voice from below. Rapunzel quickly sped towards a steep edge. 
"Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair," begged a knight at the bottom of the stone castle.
"How do you know my name?" asked Rapunzel. The knight did not say a thing. Rapunzel let down her hair and the lost knight climbed up her long hair up to the top.

Cinderella by Mollie 
Once upon a time when I was just a little child, a new royal family member arrived. Her name was Ella. When Ella was just four years old her mother died. After that an evil woman married her father. She had two daughters. They had taken Ella's room and so she had to sleep by the fire in the attic. The evil step mother used Ella as a slave. The two step sisters made fun of the ashes in her hair and called her Cinderella. Later on the family went out for a slow walk. The step-family got lost in the forest and were never seen again and Cinderella lived happily ever after.

Rapunzel by Morgan
Once lived a young girl named Rapunzel she was born with long brown hair a woman named Mother Gothal adopted the child but all she really wanted was her hair because Rapunzel's hair was magical. It healed the hurt and made Mother Gothal look and act younger. Rapunzel found out what was going on so she ran away and chopped all her hair off and turned blonde. A man named Flynn Rider came along and loved Rapunzel the moment he saw her and she loved him they both fell in love and got married Rapunzel's mother never knew what happened!

Hansel and Gretel Sam F
Once upon a time there was a small cottage. Inside there was a Mum, Dad and two little boys. One day we realised that we did not have enough food for our family. So the father brought his two boys into the forest and left them behind. When it started to get dark the boys had nowhere to go. Suddenly they saw a massive gingerbread house. So they ran as fast as they could to the door so they could go inside. As they knocked on the door a kind lady said, "You can stay here as long as you want."
The end.

Beauty and the Beast by Eleanor
Once upon a time there lived a very beautiful princess in a shining castle. The princess was so naughty she slurped her drinks; she even jumped on the table at dinner and she broke wind. 
One night an old man came to the castle. He wanted warmth from the rain and horrible weather. The princess took one look at the man and walked away slamming the castle door behind her. In one second the old man changed himself into a handsome prince. After that the prince transformed her into a hideous beast and put a powerful spell on the entire castle.



Sleeping Beauty by Madison
One day a baby princess was born and every one came to see her and nearly everyone was invited. Then there were some fairies called Sparkle, Glitter and Shine they all gave the baby Victoria a very nice present. Then an evil human sized fairy named Dark Widow swooped in and said, "Oh why was I not invited!" and she got angry and cursed baby Victoria so that when she was 18 she would fall on a bush of thorns and go to sleep for millions of years and only true love’s kiss could save her....................

Cinderella / Royalella by Jemima 
Long ago, there lived a young girl named Royella. Her mum had died years ago, that meant she'd never get a sister. So instead she decided to try and have a baby. Soon, she became pregnant. Everything was going according to plan when all of a sudden her father got married to Claireaphene, a very evil lady. Royalella's father wasn't aware that she was evil, but Royalella was. Royalella's new stepmother told her she wasn't allowed to have a baby. A while after, Royalella met the man of her dreams. They moved to Candy-land together. Royalella soon had her baby, it was named Charlotte.

Red Riding Hood by Rose 
My favourite fairy tale story is Little Red Riding Hood because it is fun to read. 
Once upon a time Little Red Riding Hood, Millie, went to bring her brother some ham and mustard because he had run out of food. As she was outside of his bedroom she saw a rat who jumped onto her shoulder. The rat was named Cow, he was Millie's brothers pet. When Millie skipped into her brother’s room she put down the food on his bedside table and popped Cow back into his cage. But she hadn't shut the bars properly, so Cow hopped out of the cage and into the wardrobe where he made a den. He did a little poo in Millie's brother’s best clothes. Millie had to sell Cow because he did a poo everywhere.

Red Riding Hood by Grace LB
There was a little girl called Red Riding Hood and she was on her way to see her granny, she walked there every week and her mother always warned her about the big bad bunny, he would steal your goodies and Red was giving granny cupcakes, but she didn't believe her. On her way she thought to herself, “How could a bunny be so scary.” She suddenly heard something behind her and then she only had one cupcake. Then she ran to her granny's house and gave her the cupcake, but all the bunny wanted was her carrot cupcakes.  

Goldilocks and the Three Bears by Charlie
There was once three royal family members. Prince William was big bear, Princes Kate was Mummy bear and Prince George was baby bear. One day they walked to the Castle in Kensington Forest where they were served with three bowls of Rice Krispies, they poured over the cold milk and listened as they went’ "SNAP", "CRACKLE" and an "ENORMOUS POP", when out jumped a little princess called Charlotte Elizabeth. The princess soon became part of the Royal family and couldn't wait to see her granny, the "Queen". Princess Charlotte was welcomed by the Queen into the arms of the Royal Family.

Goldilocks and the Three Monkeys by Harvey
Once upon time in the rain forest a girl called Goldilocks saw a treetop house so she climbed up and saw three wooden plates with bananas on them. Daddy’s banana was too ripe, Mummy’s wasn’t ripe enough and baby’s was just right. There were chairs made out of branches, Daddy’s was too rough, Mummy’s too thin and baby’s was just right. Then she saw three hammocks’, Daddy’s was too itchy Mummy’s was too scratchy and Baby’s was just right. The monkeys arrived back to find her sleeping and swung her out of the hammock she awoke and Goldilocks ran away.

Cinderella by Chloe
One day there lived two ugly sisters, a step mother and Ella Cinders. They were rich and loved their life except from Ella. She hated life and always moaned about it, well she didn’t exactly moan, she wrote about it in her wish diary. It had sixteen wishes ready for her birthday (tomorrow). She was excited and was ready to roll, but unfortunately for her she couldn’t have a party because her step mother and two sisters wouldn’t let her. She got angry about this and she stole money off her sisters to buy the beautiful dress. 
“ELLA, WHERE’S MY MONEY!!!”…

Gingerbread man by Aron
Once upon a time, lived an old man called Pat. He was lonely because his only daughter moved far away. Pat loved to bake. One day, he used a magical powder he got from his daughter. She said to use it when he feels lonely. He decided to make a big gingerbread man. After putting him in the oven it started to shatter! A massive blasting beam of blinding light came out from the old oven... The gingerbread man was alive! Pat didn't have to be alone anymore, he had a great companion and he called him Gingi.
And they lived happily ever after...

Cinderella by Caitlin 
There was a girl called Cinderella who was invited to a ball with her two ugly step sisters. When they arrived the prince was there. Cinderella danced with the prince until the clock struck 12, Cinderella ran out of the palace, leaving her shoe behind. The next morning the prince went to see whose foot it should fit. One of the ugly sisters heard of this and had an old witch cast a spell on her that any shoe she tried would fit. The shoe fit and on the day she married the prince he turned into a penniless pauper.

Caitlin - 100WC#30

As I gazed out of the kitchen window I had a feeling that this was going to be an exciting day, as I crunched on a cornflake. “Are you sure you are ready for your first day at the zoo?” asked mum cautiously. 
“Yes I am sure,” I replied confidently. I grabbed my bag off the table and left. 
As I started to walk down the street I glanced into a window to see a class as they danced. As I arrived at the zoo, it wasn't the hum drum of a normal day. The lion seemed to stare when I realised the cage door was open!

Saturday, 25 April 2015

Caitlin - X Marks the Spot

A long time ago there lived a wizard called Caspian who had discovered an old fragile scroll in his dusty attic. He had spent hours, even days, trying to work out what the x in it meant. The sentence said, in time you will find out what the x might means… “Hmmm,” he murmured. For months he thought about what the x meant. He glanced at the clock. It was 10 o'clock, that’s it x was number 10 in Roman numerals the clue was behind the number 10 on the clock. X marks the spot; he pulled out the number 10 to reveal all…

Saturday, 18 April 2015

Caitlin - 100WC#28

The look on the man’s face says it all as he looks relieved to be finally where he is. “Look at the view” his wife gasped.
“That was such a journey,” he replied, still in thought about the long voyage they had just sailed. They had dreamed of this better life for so long. The dog didn’t take his eyes of his owner he had sat beside him and had also done this long journey. They would now live a good life. “This is the life of freedom,” cried the wife. The dog barked and the people laughed.

Wednesday, 25 March 2015

Caitlin - My Ultimate Adventure

…My ultimate adventure…

The clock ticked loudly in my ear. I slowly came round from a deep sleep. This was the day, today was the day, my ultimate adventure… I was going to cycle the coast of Britain. A huge crowd gathered as I was about to set off. I could feel my heart pounding. I had a nervous feeling in my tummy. The days got tougher as my body ached more and more. I didn’t think I could make it. As the crowd cheered I managed to finally finish. It was a great feeling when I saw the amount of money raised!

Saturday, 21 March 2015

Caitlin …as they turned the corner… 100WC#26

Where was I? 
Why was I here?
I opened my eyes and I could see nothing but pitch black. I got up from the floor, I started to walk around. I couldn't see where I was walking. What was that I could feel? They seemed to be coming closer, I kept on walking as they turned the corner the lights flicked on. I looked straight up, there was a man. He asked me who I was and where I was from, his face looked distorted. I could now see light, I realised I was no longer on this planet.

Saturday, 14 March 2015

PIPE SWAM GREEN CAREFULLY HORSE by Caitlin

It was Saturday morning and I was supposed to be going horse riding. But my dad was busy unblocking the pipe in the bathroom. So I decided to go on my own little adventure. I walked through the forest: the trees were completely plain, no green. There was no animals or people in the forest. Suddenly I came across some water that blocked the path. I carefully paddled through it but it got deeper and deeper, so I swam across. As I clambered out dripping wet this was not the adventure I had intended. All this because of dad's blocked pipe…

Sunday, 8 March 2015

… then when I looked out of the plane window…by Caitlin

Today I am going on a seaplane tour and I can't wait. When I had arrived at the seaplane I was so excited I hopped inside and it took off across the ocean. It got better and better the higher up we got. Then when I looked out of the plane window a beautiful school of dolphins swam past us. The sea shone in amazing colours as we passed hundreds of fish. I held tight as the plane slowly landed in the water. As I got off the plane I knew I would remember this day forever as a very special day.

Sunday, 1 March 2015

100WC#23 The Old Settee by Caitlin

100 years ago, there was a battle between the witches and wizards. The wizards thought it would be good to kill all the witches. All the wizards put a spell on them so that they would agree with them completely. When they had succeeded the wizards put another spell on them to turn them into a stone seat. All of the witches’ cats were turned into one stone cat that sat on top of the stone seat. It is said that anyone who sits on the chair can hear the faint sound of witches crying out to break the spell. 

Sunday, 22 February 2015

100WC#21 … the silence was deafening…

In the abandoned house the silence was deafening. You couldn’t even hear a mouse until me and my friend opened the wardrobe and there was a skeleton living in there. We both screamed and ran for our lives. We ran out of the front door of the house and we were still screaming all the way home. That night I couldn’t sleep but just there next to my door was an outline of the same skeleton we saw in the wardrobe. I blinked twice and then when I opened my eyes the skeleton was gone. I knew I saw it but I was not believed by anyone.
Jessica

Today in class we had a giant paper airplane fight. It started when we were seeing how paper planes work. The teacher was tapping at the board while I could hear some folding behind me. Suddenly, a paper airplane whooshed past my shoulder. It hit the teacher's head and bounced back. The silence was deafening as the teacher turned around.
"Who did this!" he yelled. All the children pointed at the person behind me. It was Liam, the naughtiest boy in my class. Liam can scare anyone away by just pulling his mighty fist. I turned my head round.
Sam B

The silence was deafening, for an arena it was quiet. The audience were as still as statues and Messi was halfway through a flip but he was stuck in mid-air. I was the only one moving, or alive for that matter. The roof was also stuck in mid-air. I walked out of the arena, grabbing handfuls of food. No earth. No grass. No air. I had to hold my breath but soon gave up. I knew I was away from earth. The statues could have been dead people and what caused Messi to be in the air could be the gravity levels. There must be a simple explanation, there always is mind you. But where was I and how did I get here?
Mollie

The silence was deafening, on my little sisters birthday. We were supposed to be singing but no one was because there was a green nosed witch. She had frozen all my family and friends which made me very sad. The witch said I will curse your family. Which I knew I didn't want that to happen. So I had to go to the witch’s castle and see if I could go into the dungeon through the fire and see if I could get the golden trophy. Which I knew I would! In a way. I did eventually.
Mia

I was walking down the cold muddy path and everywhere was silent not a sound to be heard. The silence was deafening then a loud screeching noise came across the woods! "Eek" I shouted as I tried to cover my ears but the sound made its way through, so I started to run from the sound but it got louder and louder so I went the other way as the sound disappeared I stopped and silence was one more.  I wondered to myself what it was suddenly, it popped into my head it was my shoes! So I stepped lighter on my feet as I did NOT want to experience the sound again. But I could be wrong...
Morgan

One day I was walking along the woods, the silence was deafening that I could not hear a bird tweeting. I could smell the apple blossom from far far away. I was looking around the forest trying to find a beautiful flower to take to my mum and dad but all I could see was trees. Even though I was in the middle of the woods there was still silence. It was really weird. The trees were like a lime green. The flower I wanted was pansy because my mum’s favourite colour is yellow and my dad’s favourite colour is red.
Eleanor

I was visiting a castle in the highland in Scotland but when I got there it was empty the silence was deafening and spooky. The castle was an old ruin and they were supposed to have a tour I paid £100 for this tour. Wait what's that it’s a blue light wait this is like the Disney film brave that is in Scotland. Maybe I should follow it well Merida did not do very well when she followed the wisp so maybe I shouldn't. Let's just go yes that’s what I'm going to do go home. I'm going to get my money back.
Madison

I was at school, I hate school, I am always tripping and falling. I am the clumsiest child in my school, and I am not proud of it. It was Monday, boring Monday. It was lunchtime, and I was looking for a place to sit. Eventually I found a place to sit, as I walked over to sit down, I slipped on a banana peel. Everybody just stared at me, not saying a word. The silence was deafening. They should have laughed, but the silence was bad enough. I was so embarrassed, I never wanted to go to school again.
Jemima

A few years ago, a young baby girl was born and her name was Kara. From the minute Kara was born she had a problem with her ears. She suffered periods of loss of hearing. A few years later Kara had experienced an extremely terrifying storm. The ear-splitting sound of the storm caused further unrepairable damage and it led to Kara becoming deaf. Kara’s life was changed forever and the massive disability of not being able to hear made Kara feel the silence was deafening. Kara had to live with this disability the rest of her whole life and she was never the same….
Sophia

The little girl slowly but steadily entered the old, creaky house. She pushed the pitch black gate open with a nudge and it fell off its hinges. She stepped onto the welcome mat that looked like it wasn’t very greeting. As her feet rested on the old flooring, the silence was deafening and she slowly plodded down the stairs. Suddenly a loud bang came from the other room and she was knocked over! She ran out of the house and never set eyes on it again, leaving her prized possession an old heart charm the colour of the midnight sky.
Grace LB

I was in a car with my Dad, we drove to a park on a sunny day, then everything turned black so we had to go back home quickly before we got seen by the zombies, once we got back home we saw that everyone went out the house. But then I heard that the silence was deafening in my ears but it was only the zombies outside banging on the door. Then everything came back sunny again, then everyone came back home. Then Dad and I went to go do some racing on the rugby pitch with our remote control cars.
Charlie

On Saturday my family was going shopping in town, I didn’t want to go as shopping was boring, so I asked if they could drop me off at the library so I could look for another Diary of a Wimpy kid book and then  pick me up when they had finished. So that’s what we did. On the way I could hear birds singing, people chatting, vehicles beeping and children shouting it’s so noisy. As I entered the library and closed the door behind, the silence was deafening what a change by only walking through a door peace at last. 
Harvey

On my holiday to Spain we stayed in a big mansion but what we didn’t know was it was a spooky one. When we got there I was petrified because it was scary looking. I nearly ran as fast as I could away. I walked into my room and it was that quiet the silence was deafening. There were paintings on the wall that made me feel like they were looking at me and there were cobwebs in the corner of my room and on the room so I ran as fast as I could to my Mum and Dad.
Rio

Every Saturday, me and my friend Kieran go to the cinema. Usually we watch funny films for children, but this time it was different. Like always we chose a kids' movie, however we had no idea, like most of the children watching, what is about to happen. Through most of the movie it was hilarious, however right at the end, one of the main characters had a bad accident. Everyone held their breath with a hope for positive end. The silence was deafening as if nobody was present at the theatre. Finally, awaited by everyone, the happy ending came and we all sighed with relief.
Aron

This is it, I am playing in Wimbledon finals and it’s the championships point. It’s now or never, the crowd goes quiet, the silence was deafening. I pick up the ball and toss it up in the air. The breeze blows my hair back. I serve it, and he returns the serve, I don’t think I can get it. I leap and stretch as far as I can, the ball just touches the end of my racket. The ball hits on the white line it is in. At first I can’t believe that I have won. I had dreamt of this since I was 10.
Caitlin


The silence was deafening. But then, a sudden movement, behind the big dark bush… A rustle. A creature? What was it? And what did it want? I didn’t know, but what I did know was that it seemed aggressive… Really aggressive. As I turned away to run something grabbed my shoulder. It was out of breath, breathing hard on my neck. Quick reactions are my strength; I kicked back and made a run for it! Heading straight back for my house I heard a call, “Chloe, Chloe!”… How did it know my name?
Chloe

Thursday, 12 February 2015

100WC#20

Jessica:
The grey hyena was very lonely and miserable because he was eating his sandwich in the park with his hyena friends when he said, “I am the best hyena in all the land and also I can climb the highest mountain in all the world.” That is when all of his friends got very mad with him and walked off. He hadn't seen his friends for a week until one of them came up to him and said, “You are a horrible friend,” and then the hyena walked off without another word. From then on the hyena was very lonely.

Lily:
One day my school and I went out for a school trip. Courtney said, “So Mr. Ball where are we going?!" After a while of twiddling his thumbs Freddirick answered with, "Weren't you listening? Mr. Ball is taking us all to the zoo!" Suddenly everyone in the coach stood up screaming.
“But it is so miserable and grey outside!" answered Celia.
"Well I can't wait, until I see the hyena, I heard that hyenas laugh and can climb!" said Clarissa.
"Well I've come prepared I've got a sandwich!" shouted Bobbi. “And no climbing hyena is going to eat it ok!!"

Morgan:
One day the witch of Grey came into the town of Rainbows and Sparkle it is a magical and colourful place with happy people but the witch HATES the place! The witch was planning to make the place Miserable but failed after the power of love stopped her. She has been planning to make the town unhappy ever since and she has a plan; to dress up like them and act like them, make a sandwich for all of them that makes them angry and unhappy and take over the world with her Hyena (which was called Climb strange name) but as normal her plan failed.

Eleanor:
One day I was walking up a hill. Every day I climb it with my dad. Today I found out that there was a magical sandwich on top. Everyone knew about it that made me miserable. I was still going to climb the Grey Mountain. I got to the top layer and there was a hyena guarding it! This was a weird day. I was just going to go, but as I turned round I saw people fighting for it, so I got it. I climbed my way through the hyena and there it was.

Jemima:
After school on Tuesday, on my way home, I saw a hyena. It was grey with a little bit of brown on it, it looked really hungry. Not too soon after, I watched it climb up a hill, for a while, it was going really fast, until it was nearly at the top, when it slowed down. When it finally reached the top of the huge hill, it ran over to a very large sandwich. The hyena was miserable to see that it was very mouldy. It must have been up there for a while. The hyena was very sad.

Kieran:
Five whole years ago in south America, a grey Hyena called Josh had to climb a cliff over 500 feet to get into a club called laugh a lot. 
Josh replied “I’ll do it." Sometime later his mum made Josh a sandwich to give him hope but he just felt miserable having to climb 500 feet. The day came and Josh, his Mum and Dad and some of the club members arrived but Josh, he wasn't up to doing the climb so he shouted, "I can't do it." Consequently everybody laughed and laughed and laughed and laughed and laughed.


Olivia:
We got up one morning and we decided to go to the zoo for a family trip and so we all agreed. We got to the zoo and firstly we saw a hyena it was grey and looked very miserable so because it was miserable I gave it a sandwich to cheer it up but instead it climb the tree went crazy and attacked my sister that was very funny. Then an ambulance turned up to take her to hospital, then the zoo keeper told me off for feeding the animals. So in the end she had a broken leg.

Harvey:
In the holidays my family and I went to the zoo, it took a long time to get there and along the way one of the roads was closed so we had to go another way which added even more time to our journey. We finally arrived and the weather was not very good, the sky looked grey and miserable, we decided to have our dinner early so I ate my sandwich, while eating dinner the weather improved and we had a great time, the best bits were seeing the monkeys climb and a hyena nearly jump over the fence!

Rio:
It was a grey miserable day when I saw a hyena climb a mountain for food. 
The hyena hoped there was a nice delicious sandwich at the top of the mountain.
The hyena was extremely hungry because all the animals moved south for the winter so his food source was rationed. The hyena hoped it was a piece of meat and not jam and cheese because he doesn't like it because he’s not a vegetarian. When he got to the top of the mountain he didn’t find a sandwich he found the animals so he was even happier that day.


Aron:
It was another rainy miserable Saturday. I thought to myself. “Mmm... I will invite Kieran around." I rang him up and he agreed!
After my friend came round, my mum took us to the fossil museum! When we got through the old, grey entrance we could see... An enormous fossil of a T-Rex! There was also a big climbing wall behind it. I said, "Let's have a climb. Me and Kieran really enjoyed all the climbing, however I got very hungry, as hungry as hungry hyena. I suggested to go to Subway for a tasty sandwich. We all loved the idea.


Caitlin:
This morning I woke admiring the picture on my wall. It was of my great granddad he had climbed a mountain, I wish I could climb a mountain, but I don’t think it’s for me. So the next day I decide to do something out of this world. I was going to Africa to see the incredible animals. I packed some food and water to keep me going. I saw amazing things and animals I had never seen in my life. I felt something brush against my back, it was a grey hyena! It had taken my sandwich. It bared its teeth, I was now miserable.

Saturday, 31 January 2015

100WC#19 by Caitlin

As I glanced out my window, I saw the rain throwing itself at the glass, it looked cold and still. There were no cars or barely any people about. Until later that night the wind got so strong that the signal for the telly was really poor. So we could barely hear it. The weather man said, “There is going to be a tornado to the east of the county”. 
“Oh no, that’s us!" I shouted. I went upstairs to look out my window and tiles flew off the houses across the road 1,2,3,4,5 it was heading my way… 

Saturday, 24 January 2015

,,, what was that I could feel? … by Caitlin

“Mum do I have to stop?” I had to stop in my Uncle Terry’s house which was empty as he died a while ago. Rumour has it that the place is haunted and my uncle Terry is still there but in ghost form. It was infested with rats and has a thick layer of dust on the furniture. I went to go and brush my teeth but the pipes were clogged up with spiders. Creak went the floorboards the room was getting smaller and smaller, I buried myself under the bed covers and turned out the light what was that I could feel? …

Saturday, 17 January 2015

The light was so bright by Caitlin

In the Tower of London there is a man who is trying to steal the crown jewels. As he enters the room he turns the small gold switch off so that no one can see him as he slowly creeps into the room. Then suddenly he walks through a booby trap and sets off the siren, it is so loud it could deafen you. Then all the doors shut tight. Outside the beefeaters heard the siren they rushed in and opened the door. Suddenly he shines his torch, the light was SO bright it was blinding. The man’s last words were, “You're coming with me sonny.”

Saturday, 10 January 2015

As he started they... by Caitlin

“Cheer up,” said Harry’s dad as he passed his bedroom. Harry was fed up as he had been training for weeks for the fun run, but sadly he had broken his leg so now all his effort was worth nothing. Harry was so desperate to run in that race. Then his dad heard him talking so he decided to secretly ask if people who have crutches could still do the race. The next morning his dad said he could still take part. As he started they all cheered for him. He couldn't stop smiling as he was given a cup for the best effort.

Tuesday, 2 December 2014

The Ship by Caitlin

On a stormy day when the rain was falling there was a boat in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. The wind was so powerful it could knock out a person. As the wind built up the engine started to cut out, everyone was panicking as the boat rocked. Nearby lightning struck the boat, it rocked side to side, as the rain fell all the people on board thought they would never get out alive. The captain shouted, "if you want to survive then jump.” Thankfully everyone survived but the shipwrecked boat was a scary reminder of what might have been. 

Saturday, 29 November 2014

As the leaves rustled by Caitlin

As Chloe walked with her mum on an autumn day, there had been a strange feeling in the air. All seemed calm that day but as the leaves rustled they swirled around Chloe taking her into a strange place. There was a swan with human legs which seemed to be talking to her. “help me” it squawked. It led her to a baby swan that had hurt its leg. She rushed to set it free, when the wind blew the leaves swept her back again. “It can’t have been real” she thought. But when she glanced at the pond she saw a familiar swan!