Showing posts with label Spring #01. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Spring #01. Show all posts

Saturday, 9 January 2016

Spring Week 1 by Rhianna

I used to love two things, cake and my apple tree. Now I hate two things, cake and my apple tree. Most of you readers out there will be thinking “Why don’t you like your apple tree and cake?” Some readers won’t care. I was climbing the apple tree, when a cake fell from the tree. I was confused, for it was absurd, the idea of a cake falling from a tree, I was just about to eat it, when I saw little EDIBLE men on there! What I didn’t realize though, was the ‘sweet’ little men were killing me…

Fix by Kirsten

These men are working,
Working very hard.
The cake needs fixing,
The icing tweaking,
The flake being put up,
And the chocolate topping retopping,
The hammers keep banging,
And the screwdrivers keep turning,
Trying to get the job done in time.
This time of year is quite special,
It’s the month of spring.
It is a new start for all,
Just like the cake,
It’s being fixed,
Just like we do each year.
We fix our gaps in what we can’t do,
And make our resolutions that make us better.
This cake is like an example of,
Who we are.

Spring Week 1 by Isabelle

These little tiny men are climbing on what looks like a very delicious cupcake. I think the little men are holding forks and are trying to eat the cupcake because they are so hungry. The cake is massive to them and quite small to us. The cupcake has lots of icing and marshmallows and a small flake on top with co co powder as well, which looks very tasty to me. The cupcake case is ruby red with bits of icing on the edges from where it has been covered. The men were very lucky to eat that cake.

Spring Week 1 by Lisa

I was walking in the forest once and saw some men. They looked cold, I thought that they were collecting wood from the top because there was a big log at the top with them. They were stood on a big mountain with lots of snow. The whole mountain was slippery with ice but there were some bits that were warm and were melting. It looked like the men knew there was a hot bit but they were confused and could not find it. Then suddenly the mountain started to crack. Then as a big surprise to them. CRASH!