Saturday, 15 October 2016

...the material felt like... by Cloud

As me and my friends got closer to the doll in the middle woods I felt my heart pounding louder and louder. Neither of us knew where it came from or who it belongs to but what we did know was that it was very creepy. Out of all my friends, I was the first one to actually pick up the doll and get a good look at it. I felt the doll's beautiful silk dress the material felt like the kind of dress the queen would wear, it was so soft and looked expensive. Finally, one of my friends spoke, "I think we should try and find out who this doll belongs to." 

1 comment:

  1. I love the descriptive language you have used to create a clear picture in my mind as I read your writing. Great job.