I was walking slowly through town not thinking about anyone
only thinking about what to do next. I glanced and saw a funny looking creature
- well I didn't know if it was a creature. I saw it in the corner of my eye. It
looked strange, it was a hand with finger and a mouth, ears, eyes and nose.
What was it doing there I said to myself? I did not have a clue. Where did it
come from? I had far too many questions popping through my busy mind, I did not
know what to think of it.
You use punctuation quite well. It helps me flow through your writing and understand it all. That hand does seem perplexing.
ReplyDeleteSamantha, TEAM100WC, USA