Everyone alive stopped what they were doing and grabbed someone else's hand and started marching into an endless hole located in a disabled person's house. It went on, people from all over the country, hypnotised by the swirling of this black hole. No-one was ever seen again after they entered the house of an unknown alien. Not the house itself was the thing causing the disaster, it was the shed, located above. People had theories. Theories that the shed was actually a space ship, others said that a machine was inside, making crazy things happen all over. Nothing seemed right...
What a mysterious hole, Anh, I wonder what happened to all those people. I liked how you began, I could really picture everyone grabbing hands. I liked your effective short sentences too, such as 'People had theories.' Well written.
ReplyDeleteMr Leatherdale (Team 100)