The cell was cold and dirty; I didn’t like it. I had been
put in there for not doing homework which is stupid. I didn’t dare sit anywhere
because of the cold and filthy place. The bed was uncomfortable and the floor
was too cold to sit on. It didn’t look like I could escape but even if there
was a way I still wouldn’t have a plan; Alcatraz is known for its inescapable
prison so I guess it was goodbye to sunlight for me. I didn’t like being locked
up; I don’t think anyone likes to be locked up.Saturday, 2 July 2016
The Prison Cell by Isabelle
The cell was cold and dirty; I didn’t like it. I had been
put in there for not doing homework which is stupid. I didn’t dare sit anywhere
because of the cold and filthy place. The bed was uncomfortable and the floor
was too cold to sit on. It didn’t look like I could escape but even if there
was a way I still wouldn’t have a plan; Alcatraz is known for its inescapable
prison so I guess it was goodbye to sunlight for me. I didn’t like being locked
up; I don’t think anyone likes to be locked up.
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Isabelle,
ReplyDeleteThis was an extremely well written piece of work. You featured a lot of detail into such a small number of words with varied descriptive vocabulary and correct punctuation and sentence structure. Well done!
Emily, Team100WC